All Comments on 'Red Riding Hood Ch. 01'

well you've got me hooked from the get go. can't wait to read more keep up the brill writing.

This is interesting, I would love to read more of this =)

I'm hoping you'll be posting another chapter soon? (make it soon so you won't be like those other writers that take a month to repost a new chapter lol)

Oh and make it a bit longer?

that was it really you could have added more or something because it wasn't really exciting at all and when it slightly did you ended it either do more or just take it down until you have more to give