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Tangea Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/10/11

Good start!

I look forward to seeing your story progress!!

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by Anonymous08/11/11

looks good so far

Great start... keep em coming.

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by Anonymous08/26/11

Here are some tips

Good story so far.
Here is some stuff to help you out
http://storiesonline.net/article/Fifteen_Steps _to_a_Dramatic_Plot

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by Darktezza03/20/14

More!

Awesome beginning! Please continue the story

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