All Comments on 'Rebecca and Alan and the Summer'

by abiguy

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maryflomaryfloover 12 years ago
hello i'm french

or be the incest?

smydlolsmydlolover 12 years ago
more ._.

fantastic so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wrong area

belongs in the nonerotic area not a bit of incest or taboo and way to short. use the proper catagories from now on or don't post at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good start

I think the author is trying to set the stage here. Allready a few things hinted at. My curiosity is piqued. What's next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good story

just ended too quick

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More Discribing

Need alot more discription. Like what did rebeccas pussy look like... how big was Alana cock...di Alan and his friend ere fuck or suck or just blow. Other than describing it was good write more

abiguyabiguyover 12 years agoAuthor
From the author...

As a reader so eloquently told me I screwed up and did not mark this as chapter 1 of hopefully many. If this can be changed I will do so immediately.

Thank you all for the kind words so far and I hope to have another chapter up shortly.

sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

All a bunch of hot air.

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