Bedding the Babysitter Ch. 04

Holy God!

you are the best

Loved it, more pleeeeeeeeeeeeese . Dave xx

Bravo

Once again your stories leave me begging for more...as always i look forward to the next chapter of this and so many of your other serials as well as new submissions and begging and submission is something i relish winkwink.

Wow

Another great instalment cant wait for part 5

Another good read.

Thank you. I had been wondering when this chapter would be posted. I am looking forward to Ch. 5 with Karen and Jenny's mothers submission. Yummy. Also, looking for the next "party" at Le Chateau.

This Is So Good

Chapter 4 was a long time coming, but worth the wait. Please keep this story going. I so look forward to more of he adventures of our submissive heroine.

Very good

Great scenarios and descriptions.

ooooohh, that was an evil place to end the chapter.....i really hope you release Ch 5 soon!!!!

Please more

I have to say I have loved this story. I just found it and have for the first time read the story from the first chapter to the current in one setting.

Hope to see more soon.

omg what a cliffhanger ending!!!!!!!

you keep getting better and better. LOVED IT!!

--J

im one of the first day commenters, what an honer!!!

well you know you cant just leave us hanging like this ;)
although i think you should finish some old ones too while your at it. i hate seeing unfinished stories

commented on the first day wooooo!!! suck on that literotica fans!!! :D

oh come on

why, lol, why end it there. well have fun and hope to see chapter 5 up soon ;) loved it there needs to be a 6th star ^_^

I loved it! Anticipation is so very erotic. I'd started writing this chapter in my imagination, wondering how it might go. The bookstore scene was a brilliant transition. I'm on my mobile, so I have to stop, but please don't you stop writing.

Need more!!!!

This just keeps getting better and better and I can't wait for chapter five. Great job!

Wow, this could be the hottest story I have every read! Can't wait for next chapter.

NOOOOOoooo

It ended just when it was getting good!!!!

Please

Please please continue this series. Its so good. Please make chapter 5.

chapter 5,6,7

please continue writing this story , i loved reading every chapter, an excellent read, please write some more chapters

more

please continue, awesome series

Wonderful Story

Please continue with the seduction of Mommy. You have created a wonderful seduction story from start to finish. I want to hear how mom succumbed to Karen. Make it as steamy as possible please. Thank you for the wonderful story so far.

great story

great story. I hope you conntinue with this. It is awesome.

Fabulous story

Absolutely fabulous! A pure erotic joy to read!

Irresisable smell of Rosie's hairy fat black pussy?????

I'm dying to know who gets to submit to Rosie and gets their face pissed on as a condition of their relationship?????

more please

excellent story so far,please continue soon

Erotic!!

I loved the double dildo section! I was dripping wet just after I finished reading that section!

O M G

Your stories are always so real. They leave me begging for more. You got to tell us the entire story of 'mommie slut' and her seduction by Karen. I would love to read about Jenny becoming her mother's mistress. As a cheerleader Jenny will go to many parties, perhaps her mother will come along as well and satisfy the frontline of the football team or the entire basketball squad. I am sure Mistress megan has a use for her.... SexTeacher

High School Life of Lesbains

I loved all the chapters. I would have hoped for a better ending, not hanging on like this but now I will be waiting for the next chapter like everyone else. Hurry up! Don't wait to long so we don't lose interest.

Hmm

Loved it, all except the part with the mom, could definitely have left that out completely, and why so little about jenny and Ashley?

Pay no attention to that wisecrack about Mommy

WE WANT MORE!!!

Author's Note: Part 5 and beyond

Thanks to all the people who have read, voted and enjoyed this series, it is very flattering!!! Yes, I do have plans for a part 5 (Mom's story) and part 6 (the date). That said, writing these sequels have been very challenging (part 4 took me 4 months and three re-writes).

I hope to have part 5 out in early 2011...but am currently having writer's block for this series...(writing sequels is tougher for me than starting a whole new series)

So if u have any suggestions, drop me a line...I don't promise I will use it, but I sure will listen...

Kisses Jasmine

you are really an artist ! go on ...I love this story...thanks

Wonderful!

Great story, so hot. Had me really wet again. Thank you so much.

wow

Wow, this series is getting better and better keep up the good work!

So glad you overcame your draught

This is beautiful story. Loved reading about her finally getting it on with her teacher and the love that radiated from the story when Jenny spoke with Ashley.

As always, keep up the flow; we'll keep reading. Why? You know why. You are a marvelous writer and your stories are hotter than molten iron.

ive read

The book delirium and the ending made me cry

More more more !

I love it !! Can't wait for the next one ! That ending is fantastic

So glad I'm reading this after all the chapters are out

Though I don't comment on here much I have to do it here. This story in it's entirety is amazing, and it definitely pleases the little sub in me that I don't let out quite as much as I should. That cliff hanger at the end was brilliant but I'm so glad all the chapters are out, I would have gone insane waiting for an update.

~ Shy Valentine xox

dominate

I was wondering when or if Jenny had a mom and when would she find out Jenny 's secret. So glad it is now out in the open.