It wasnt realistic at all. most incest relationships start off with hesitation, guilt, and shame. i guess im just a sucker for realistic situations. aside from the story not being realistic you have a ton of spelling errors and sometimes i had trouble follwing what was being said. maybe in your next chapter give it a scan over a few times. there are also editors that will help. please keep writing though! youll see you get better as time goes on. the story was pretty good aside from the errors.
Great Story bud. Don't worry about Mr "Anonymous", if he wants reality he can watch all that death and violence in the news. If any of these anonymous people had any guts they'd have a contact name like me. As far as spelling errors who cares, I personally use Mozilla's Firefox 5, as a web browser and it has a selling program built into it, and I never worry about it, but for these stories it really doesn't matter. Thanks and keep up the great story telling.
I want to know how the first kid shot cum over his head onto his chest. Where is his cock? Attatched by his ass like a tail? Great sex, good plot, but the execution failed.
It was a most welcome Eros charged fantasy. I'm looking forward to Dr Martin's seduction of the son of Dr Martin's patient.. and also the carnal pleasuring between Dr Martin's son and her patient. I'm looking forward also to the same gender sexual gratification among Secretary lisa, Dr
Martin and her female patient, as well as between both female parents with their sons... and same gender gratification shared between the two sons... I'm about to have a fantasticly explosive fantasy-induced orgasm in anticipation of another Eros charged scenario penned from your imagination ... a depiction of incestuous lesbo-homo carnal small group sexuality. Congratulations on your vivid exposition of humankind's, often secret, inner lusts for carnal intimacies with family and friends of same and opposite gender. Free your readers from their pent up scruples which inhibit their secret craving for incestual image asistance in their masturbationary foci enroute to their orgasmic crescendo!
BTW... Know and appreciate that your erotic creativity is certain to bring thousands of persons to explosive orgasmic exhilaration ... at their own hands' service.
Hugs, Randy RodUp ()()=====ID ~
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it was alright....
It wasnt realistic at all. most incest relationships start off with hesitation, guilt, and shame. i guess im just a sucker for realistic situations. aside from the story not being realistic you have a ton of spelling errors and sometimes i had trouble follwing what was being said. maybe in your next chapter give it a scan over a few times. there are also editors that will help. please keep writing though! youll see you get better as time goes on. the story was pretty good aside from the errors.
Excellent
Great Story bud. Don't worry about Mr "Anonymous", if he wants reality he can watch all that death and violence in the news. If any of these anonymous people had any guts they'd have a contact name like me. As far as spelling errors who cares, I personally use Mozilla's Firefox 5, as a web browser and it has a selling program built into it, and I never worry about it, but for these stories it really doesn't matter. Thanks and keep up the great story telling.
errors
I want to know how the first kid shot cum over his head onto his chest. Where is his cock? Attatched by his ass like a tail? Great sex, good plot, but the execution failed.
Sons are for :pleasurung moms.
It was a most welcome Eros charged fantasy. I'm looking forward to Dr Martin's seduction of the son of Dr Martin's patient.. and also the carnal pleasuring between Dr Martin's son and her patient. I'm looking forward also to the same gender sexual gratification among Secretary lisa, Dr
Martin and her female patient, as well as between both female parents with their sons... and same gender gratification shared between the two sons... I'm about to have a fantasticly explosive fantasy-induced orgasm in anticipation of another Eros charged scenario penned from your imagination ... a depiction of incestuous lesbo-homo carnal small group sexuality. Congratulations on your vivid exposition of humankind's, often secret, inner lusts for carnal intimacies with family and friends of same and opposite gender. Free your readers from their pent up scruples which inhibit their secret craving for incestual image asistance in their masturbationary foci enroute to their orgasmic crescendo!
BTW... Know and appreciate that your erotic creativity is certain to bring thousands of persons to explosive orgasmic exhilaration ... at their own hands' service.
Hugs, Randy RodUp ()()=====ID ~
An interesting story
Very erotic and well written.
Raquel is certainly an erotic woman and her son is the male to please her.
Thanks for the read
Recycled stuff
You're getting lazy in your old age, Walt. You took a lot of text from "Son Controls His Mother".
meaning
will there be more i hope
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