Sweet story line. Nicely done. Gave you a five.
This was great. Will there be a next installment? I would like to read more about howie
good for a laugh not much more.
Funny and sexy. The regrets of the girl at the end were interesting, though nicely subtle throughout. Gotta wonder will this have a happy end?
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Loved it
Sweet story line. Nicely done. Gave you a five.
This was great. Will there be a next installment? I would like to read more about howie
good fof a laugh
good for a laugh not much more.
Hilarious and hot
Funny and sexy.
The regrets of the girl at the end were interesting, though nicely subtle throughout.
Gotta wonder will this have a happy end?
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