Surviving Bennett Ch. 01

Good start.

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this was a very good start, as brief as it was. Nico? for a baby girl? I hope that's short for nicole at least.

A lovely start

I'm looking forward to reading more. I hope you post the next chapter soon. :-)

Good start, though can I suggest instead of expressing years as 2.5, express it as 'two and a half'. I also hope Nico is short for Nicole or something else.

*****

A good editor wouldn't hurt, but your talent is obvious.

Five, for promise.

I can already tell I'm gonna like this story!

Havnt left a comment on a story in like 2 years but girl you have skill please be an author on here that finishes a story! I'll be looking for an update :)
Great job.

very good potential

This story has the potential to be very great, but I would suggest to get an editor to help with the flow of the story. Other than that it was a nice read.

More please!

Great writing so far, I hope you ve more chapters planned.... I'll be looking out for em :-)

Promising

Continue please. This is a good start. Carry on... :)

Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!

Please oh please oh pleeeaaaase be one of those authors that adds a new chapter every week or two. I'm soo hooked with just this one. The intro to this chapter drew me in for keeps. I can't wait till he finds out it's his baby and I am so looking froward to hearing how it all started. You are amazing. Just earned yourself a big fan. Don't let me down.

AMAZING story

Nice

I'm loving this story so far. The characters are so interesting and are developing well. Keep up the good work :)

Thank you!

Thanks everyone for the great feedback!!

Chapter 2 is being worked on as we speak...so I hope to have it up this week. I know how it is to invest in a story and not have it be complete, so I won't leave you guys in limbo...

In terms of editors, if anyone knows of any on Literotica that are great...let me know and I will definitely utilize them!

Poor thing, I can only imagine how rejected she felt