Charlotte's Story Ch. 01

Enjoyed it!

Very good start. Hope you continue with this

Great start, please keep going xx

lovely start!

You've certainly piqued my interest. I look forward to more.

great start to your story now let it rip with more your erotic life

well you have broken the ice so now its time to go for that next part of im sure a very hot horny next part. of charlotte's story

enjoyed it

Would like to hear more about how it started and where it goes.

you warned Us.

you told us that you tend to be a little wordy. My opinion is that you might be a little too hard on yourself. This seemed like just the right amount of description to begin this story. And it doesn't take being female to see why you started this way. I can't wait for more. Charlotte seems to need to learn that professional lives and personal lives should be completely different. Most successful women are powerful ON THE JOB.... but gladly give up that power when they leave the office. 5 stars.

Really great start!

And I absolutely loved your writing; I don't know why you think you are not a good writer. It was so natural and real, compared to a lot of stories on here. I actually felt like I was there. I really hope you post again.

Good Start

I expect you to continue this wonderful tale, writing often and in the same detail. You are not to criticize your effort or your skills - the trolls on this site will do that for you. Your obvious honesty and desire to please add significant credibility to your writing and I demand the same in future chapters. Hold nothing back.

more please

Good so far

A most lovely tale.

Thank you.

Thank you all

Thank you all for your encouraging comments! I am so glad you liked me, both you who posted here and you who send me e-mail feedback. I am working on the next one now.

Kisses!

Charlotte.

Worth repeating another's compliment

Ton8ty made an excellent comment. I've copied and pasted his words: "Your obvious honesty and desire to please add significant credibility to your writing". I felt that those words are worth repeating. Not only did you write a story about a submissive, you wrote in a beautifully submissive way. Great job and absolutely lovely. Thank you.

Amazing!

Amazing. You had me mesmerized with the ease of the story. I couldn't stop reading. I couldn't wait for the next word...the next sentence...I wish it had been a book. You remind me of myself. So in tune with the feelings and thoughts of others and yourself. Good Work! And I look so forward to hearing more about your journey. Kudos!

Oh my, I hadn't read comments here in forever. Thank you all sooooo much!

Charlotte