by NeverWinterNite
First of all, this was too short and secondly, it was unrealistic. If he's incapable of bathing himself, then he's incapable of taking control and the foreplay described.
I didn't say he was incapacitated. Plus, this is only chapter 1.
Entertaining story, interesting characters! Really looking forward to reading more!
Good job on your first story Never. I will be interested to see what happens next.
I've met a few such nurses and truly felt that their hands-on approach to discharging their duties sped the healing process. While the story would have been more fun, had you made it a tad longer, it still was a nice read. Don't worry about negative comments from anonymous sources, as you shouldn't concern yourself with the opinions of those unwilling to allow you to contact them to help you write a better (by their estimations) story.
Keep `em coming.
I hope you keep writing, and I am always turned on by naughty nurses... Ace
Please read my nurse story if you get a chance.
I love nurse patient stories. Great job this is quite well written
Very nice short story, great character development in a short span. Will definitely read the next ones