All Comments on 'Naughty Nurse Ch. 01'

by NeverWinterNite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Unrealistic

First of all, this was too short and secondly, it was unrealistic. If he's incapable of bathing himself, then he's incapable of taking control and the foreplay described.

NeverWinterNiteNeverWinterNiteover 12 years agoAuthor

I didn't say he was incapacitated. Plus, this is only chapter 1.

ConsideringConsideringover 12 years ago
good fantasy

Entertaining story, interesting characters! Really looking forward to reading more!

BigTXTeddyBearBigTXTeddyBearover 12 years ago
Nice start

Good job on your first story Never. I will be interested to see what happens next.

WyldePrinceWyldePrinceover 12 years ago
This is a nice story, keep it up

I've met a few such nurses and truly felt that their hands-on approach to discharging their duties sped the healing process. While the story would have been more fun, had you made it a tad longer, it still was a nice read. Don't worry about negative comments from anonymous sources, as you shouldn't concern yourself with the opinions of those unwilling to allow you to contact them to help you write a better (by their estimations) story.

Keep `em coming.

texasacetexasaceover 12 years ago
I like your style...

I hope you keep writing, and I am always turned on by naughty nurses... Ace

Please read my nurse story if you get a chance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Crazy hot.

I love nurse patient stories. Great job this is quite well written

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Short and sweet

Very nice short story, great character development in a short span. Will definitely read the next ones

texasacetexasacealmost 12 years ago
Keep writing...

What a delicious dirty mind this wonderul nurse has...

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