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Uh this was weird and not my brand of kink! I liked it anyway.
The ending was a giveaway but the journey was pretty nice. I would have enjoyed a couple hints of what was to come with her sowing fear and confusion alliterating the bite size portions of salmon with black humor that a first grade Dom sciuld have ( see the author Cotoure's stories), There was just a hint of that with the store bought cheesecake but then no more, Still the author made me fully empathize with lead character's sense of being adrift. Nice job on the whole!
Nice
I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
Alicia
Your story was very touching...and I felt as if I knew Philip and Alicia....thank you..
Truly amazing
Wow what a rollercoaster of emotions absolutely brilliant story.
5*s
Brilliant story,such a rollercoaster, loved every chapter and aligned with Phil throughout, just wish I could find a mistress to take charge of my ass.
Thank you.
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