by LoveHugeBoobs
I liked it strangely erotic, though I am sure you were going for that. A couple of things though and it's just a thought, but if he was facing her he could not have kept his cock in her as he spun her around and was suddenly fucking her from the back. I mean really, (looks closely at the writer of the piece saying) Have you ever even done that, because I am telling you you can't. So in the future, let's keep it real. (grins and then breaks out into a smile and says softly) Thank you! Now you may continue and I should take the time to sign up so you can reply to this post. I will for next time and if your a person who pays attention to details you will figure it out. Again, nicely done.
Oh oh, somebody's in trouble with the missus, Superman's been a bad hubby! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.