All Comments on 'The Lustful Wife-Mom Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sucks

Chapter 3, still going no where, just starting over

imurddyimurddyover 12 years ago
different perspective

I like hearing the daughter's thoughts, however, you should've given some new information to titilate your readers, by this time most people want more from the story. Keep working at it.

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