Can't wait to read the next chapter...great story!
Can't wait for the next adventure at the Shady Ranch.
What an imagination. Its a great story.
Can't wait to read more, the whole series is fantastic!
I check on a biweekly basis for more.
Love you series.
I just wanted to say a big thank you for your incredible work. I'm only up to the end of Chapter 12, but I love this story the most out of all erotic fiction I've ever read so far! So, that's saying something!! I decided to post at the end of your latest chapter, so you would most likely see my comments! I love the gradual transformation and slutty things you've forced onto the person - the tramp stamp, the surgery (which I noticed at the start of chapter 13), the tongue piercing, the constant use of suprise video recordings (that is REALLY hot). I also like to see a constant struggle throughout the series. I love the bimbofication/porn star type situations being forced onto the person as well. I'm afraid I don't have any real negative feedback - so far you've managed to surpass my expectations for an insanely hot story!! Well done. I look forward to more work from you, perhaps on a different story altogether to keep things fresh? (but in the same forced feminization genre hopefully!!)
I just read this story for the first time and I’m hooked! I read all 18 chapters so far in a day!
I love how you're making her become a real cock slut, i think that’s the hottest thing ever.
You're grammar and that are almost perfect, I love your word play - i wish i could write like you, and as descriptive!
I LOVED how you made Candi’s clitty vibrate, making her beg for more – thats what i want to see more of! I loved the idea of her getting her clit removed and having the surgeon do the nerve endings to make her crazy, like it was mentioned before.
There are no major negatives i can really write, but I’ll give it a go since you really need that sort of thing in a review.
I wish you'd hurry up with her transformation. No, you’ve done great with her physical transformation; It’s hot! But her mental transformation, I really want to see her looking at cocks and wondering what they look and taste like when she's walking down the street. Or to have her beg to be on the dildo machine like her Master told her she'd beg to have used on her at the start!
And secondly, I see that recently there have been two month gaps between updates; I’m not complaining as something is better than nothing; but I can’t wait that long for the next chapters!
I’d be happy to help out with idea’s and writing if you find you don’t have enough time to do it – if you like that is. Email me if you do want some help, idea’s, ect, I’d be happy to help. I just hope you’re not losing interest in the story.
Oh my gawd!
This is a fantatic read. I recommend anyone looking for a Dominant female, & who loves dressing feminine like I do, to read this story.
Every evening I was reading this, I would dress & imagine I was Candi. I would indulge in self plearue, edging constantly till the plot became so hot, I would have a glorious climax, then lick my hand clean.
I will be watching for subsequent chapters with the anticipation of a total transformation & a truly cock & pussy hungry slut who will be insatiable.
This story has further reinforced why I so desire a Dominant Lady who enjoys a crossdresser/transvestite like me. I crave the need for a Lady with interest & desires to be in her power.
I am a mature bisexual, but being dressed & commanded by This Lady to satisfy both genders would be truly incredible.
Sissy Indy, your writting is so perfect. The discription of the scenes, the positions, the humiliation, the sexual torture of submitting with out constent, the use of drugs, & the variety of toys, & clothing was totally awesome.
With all the edging, & wonderful climaxes I achieved reading this story, was very pleasing & pleasuring. I lost count of the climaxes, I lost count at 8, & hadn't even finished Chapter 6.
I hope a Dominant Lady reads this comment, and is in the eastern Pa area, Maryland (where I have been working the pass 3 years), NJ, & De areas, if you would be interested in my desired request for a Dominant Lady to serve & please, you may contact me at mirick17901@y-------.
Hugz N Kisses,
shouldnt candi have prostate orgasms all the time?
just finished it.
the terms are 'antidote' and 'shuddered'. 'anecdote' and 'shuttered' are completely different things, these pulled me out of my fantasy every time i saw the mistake. petty i know, but i really don't like poor English.
apart from that, i love it.
it's taken me a week to read the whole story, and i've gotten off at least twice a night just reading this.
keep it up, i certainly hope to see more of candi!
This story is simply amazing! I can't wait for next chapters.
When is the next chapter! I keep coming back almost daily to see if another chapter is up.
This story is too good to wait. Its kinky and it is good from a writers point of view.
Best thing I've ever read in long long time. I come every day to check if there is a new episode.
Keep up the good work!
Love the series so far. Can't wait for the next installment.
Please keep the feminisation forced it is so much better than the "oh I realised i liked it all along " that happens in most stories and spoils them in my opinion
Best erotic story I have ever read in my entire life. I couldn't stop reading!!!
I wish it was me that this happened too. It sounds like such a rush!!!
This series is a cut above most of the other stuff I've read. It's really pushing my buttons for some reason and I keep coming back to check for the next instalment. I'm finding it really erotic and I can't wait to see what happens next. The mix of overt and subtle changes is great, especially how it's handling the gradual mental shift in Candi's acceptance of her new shape. I like slow change stories but even though the physical changes were done quickly, the ongoing little additions to change Candi's behaviour and thinking are nice little steps. The only thing I can be critical about is misusing some incorrect words, but someone else has already commented on that, so I'll just shut up and beg for more.
Honestly, this story is more then an erotic story and really is a good read. Part of me just loves the roll of candi (I'm even kind of jealous) and part of me really feels sorrry for Andi. Like, I just want to break into the story and help him escape. Which, is weird but it's just the way I feel. I really hope that this story ends happily. I hope he escapes. I hope he gets revenge. I realize that this would kind of ruin the whole fanticey behind it but it would just make this a great story. To make it interesting Andy can get revenge on "master" by making him a bitch.
And I hope Andy never really accepts Candi. I can relate to him on so many levels right now.
Thanks - A.J.
I just love this story, wish it happened to me. Wish i was candi. So, When is the next chapter comin. Can't wait.
wen is d next chapter coming..........waiting
this is one of the best stoties i have read
please finish the series
p.s this would make an exelant film
"I had to admit (never aloud, but just in my mind) that I was fucking hot"
Ha, Candi is starting to feel proud of her looks. This is a good start. And more tattoos on her body ? It's almost making me want to have sluttish tattoos myself. I can't imagine how this series is going to end, but I hope it doesn't end before chapter 30.
I think I am going to make a promise to myself: if this series ends perfectly and completely satisfying to me not before chapter 30 I am going to make slut tattoos when I transition into a woman. Candi is becoming a kind of idol to me.
This story is the best I have ever read and I check like every week for the next chapter. Please come out with it already!
Wow, what a great chapter. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Candi has come so far but i am sure she has a long journey ahead.
i am a big fan of candi. so far, i wished that i could be like candi. i could not understand why she was not thrilled with her gifts and opportunities. in this episode, it dawned on me that her, and the other women at the shady ranch, were kidnap victims. so now i am starting to wonder if i would be so enthusiastic, if i was held captive, and was told i would have my dick cut off, if i tried to escape. i think i now understand the conflict for candi. she loves her new feminine body, but does not enjoy the humiliation of being forced to be a cock slut. although there is some evidence that she enjoys some of that life, she seems to be pondering the possibility of getting sensitive nerve endings for her pussy, and how wonderful that would feel. she now has the choice to voluntarily make herself a complete woman, or fight to stay a man, while trying to escape. either way it will be an exciting story. please continue this great work. p.s. i still hope she decides to become a complete woman
best story i ever read here.
neads new chapter
I love that Candi is forced into being a female sex slave with no real reason behind it all. He doesnt like the sex really nor his ladyboi body. I love though!
Yawn. You've been playing the same tune for the last 18 chapters. It's past old and tired. Here, I'll show you... Next chapter will have... more forced femme, more rape, more domination, and more of our "woe is me" lead wishing and hoping to get back to his/her normal life (boo hoo!).
This was interesting about 15 chapters ago, but as it's going nowhere, along with the character and his/her character arc,,, yeah, I'm so done.
The only one's "trapped and trained" are the poor saps still reading the same chapter, 18 chapters later.
this story is fantastic and my total fantasy I wish I was Candi
I was at this ranch in South America, dressed in a body stocking, high heels, with a butt plug up my ass pussy. I was ravished by two men and three girls. Then I was put to work at the ranch, sucking off the cowboys. What a trip.
This is one my top 3 stories and I routinely check to see if you've updated it but you haven't in several months! Stories like this make me want to dress up sometime. Keep on going.
Huumm, really Marshallslutfuck ? Porto Alegre as in Brazil ? I am Brazilian myself, could you indicate me the name and address of the ranch ? As a slutty tranny I would love to work there as a whore like Candi, it's my greatest dream.
I just the 18 chapters of Trapped and Trained good work. The story flows along nicily. It has some very funny parts. I just wish in my youth I had met these folks to change me. Now I'm 61 years young so all I can do is dream. I'm waiting for the rest of the story. I'm all wet thanking about it so please write it soon.
When are we going to get another chapter
Must have more!
when are we going to get more chapters of this story
I wonder if the author got kidnapped like in the story and that's why they stopped :(
Please don't make us wait a year for the next. Are you punishing us? Did I do something wrong?
Pleased come back soon with more chapters. The wait is soo long
i love your story and hope you continue on with it soon
How is the story going to end ....or has it.
Will Candi ever escape
Will Candi be change (surgery) into a complete woman
Will Candi ever get revenge
What will be the final outcome?????
I really like how the story. I am a bit suprised Candi is not contemplating suicide.
Is there any more on the way?
Thank you so much for sharing this story It has been a long time since I have read something so GOOD SissyIndy you have such a great talnet ,I do hope to read more about Candi
Have we heard all that we are going to from Candy? Is this thing over?
Is this the end?
We need to know what happens to Candi!!!
Is he/she just going to live out her useful life at the ranch.... or is he/she ever going toescape and get revenge????
I have to say this is the best story I read on hear. When's the movie coming out? Hell I would be happy with an ending. Does the poor guy get away? Or will he be stuck in hell for life?
Don't tell me that this it ...........when do we get more???
Awesome story. Thank You. We need to have MORE! MORE! MORE!
Where does Candi go from here?
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