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by MyZenTrail08/12/11

purpose (~_*)

the first stanza replays in my mind
the latter i ponder in depth
nice write

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by Maria239408/14/11

and to each season

I love poems about wind and rain and purpose. We may never know our own purpose, much less that of a raindrop, past the obvious.

I perhaps would rework the third line of the first stanza, other than that, it is a beauty. I enjoy reading you, sweet Boo.

~ m

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by UnderYourSpell08/16/11

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Glad you are back to submitting, think 'nor' would work better in the third line 1st stanza instead of 'as did'

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