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by WillowedCabin08/11/11

I dug the last stanza.

Not sure about the rest of the poem though. I'll come back later and reread.

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by PoissonSurLaLune08/11/11

Cut it down!

After reading a few of your poems I have to say that you have some really beautiful images and ideas, but you let them get washed away in torrents of pointless expository. Work on building your strengths and not spreading yourself thin!

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