Lisa - Fat Friend of a Friend

Rubbish

Enough said - Rubbish

Really?!

You consider this writing? You think this PIECE OF CRAP WITH the all-caps, is actually worthy of being posted?
Buried in there was an interesting story concept, but it was completely lost in the actual delivery.

Wow, you think a size 6 or 8 is fat? Lovely.

You may wish to seek an editor if you decide to write another story.

Garbage

If these are your attitudes, you are the kind of guy that gives the rest of us a bad name! Please don't write anymore of this kind of trash. It is demeaning to everyone especially the writer!

Wow to be you, what men you and your buddy are!

I've had skinny and huge and everything in-between, you know what, they wee all human beings who deserved respect.

You don't like fat chicks then maybe you and your asshole buddy should just fuck each other!

very close minded... it shows in this thing you called a story. very weak from beginning to end

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

wow, this sucks

you write shitty, disrespectful, fat girl-hating work

close minded writer

What a waste of letters....