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Give Me a Baby

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by Anonymous

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by vargas11107/15/04

WellCrfted!

This was tight and got to the point.

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by 12/15/05

A prisoner of her fears

But there are different levels of fear. Now she has a new one to deal with, much worse than the original.

A nicely crafted story!

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by don8765412/15/05

A good start and very natural....

She and her hubby wanted a baby badly. He was a wimp for sports and getting drunk. She got preggie by another man, which serves her husband right. God made us "good" and that includes a woman being able to get pregnant by any man...even not her husband. If God had wanted it any other way He would have made a man and woman so that they would only be able to fuck and breed with their first sexual partner. This is a very natural phenomenon and rates with the highest score possible!

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by Anonymous12/15/05

don87654

Is an ass. Your story is fine, he's the one that's screwed up.

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by Anonymous02/02/06

Kinky! I Loved It!

Your story not only had my favorite subject: Married women getting pregnant during extramarital sex and having their unsuspecting husband raise the child, thinking it is his; Your story also had that kinky part of where she did not even know she was with another man and had to undergo that shock as well as knowing she would have to deceive her husband into believing the baby she would have was his. More like this please.

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by don8765402/02/06

Breeding time?

don87654 did not write this story. Softly is not don87654 so apparently don87654 is not the only one that likes this kind of story on Literotica.

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by don8765412/06/06

Good reading!

A great story. She was bred in the same way that God intended for her to get bred....by any dick that could shoot into her womb and seed her, like ALL human beings are created. So much for man-made marriages, etc.

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by Anonymous01/21/09

Good effort!

I enjoyed the story, but the ending was a bit abrupt. Still, well done!

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by bruce2201/21/09

Reasonable Plot

But sort of telegraphed.... No real characters

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by Anonymous03/13/10

pregnant

Robin gets her wish but hopefully her unknown lover looks a little like her husband so he doesn't know the child isn't his. Nice story that held your attention.

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by Anonymous06/24/13

I bet this old yarn

gets passed around at the A.A. meetings. "See what happens when Alcohol is your crutch? You have another man's baby!" Congratulations on knowing that nothing else was needed in this tale. However, it seems that the stifled sexuality between her and Bob would lead to divorce problems anyway, with or without the alcoholism and adultery.

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