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this whole series has been amazing. I can't wait to read more of your writings!!! :)
What a waste
what the hell was it about, completely boring, and where the heck was it headed...........duh what the hell just happened??
Bravo!!
Well Done, Sir! And Madam!!
Excellent job!
Thanks!
Interesting
I am a huge fan of your work and read you stories with enthusiasm.
However I have to say you were loosing me throughout the middle chapters, I only continued to read them in the hopes that they would be the prelude to a grande finale.
I am happy to say that I was not disappointed! Brilliant ending, though as I said the middle was dodgy.
Continue writing, you are certainly good at it!
Brilliant!!
Loved this you are an amazing writer keep up the great work!!
was a bit complicated at the very end
But I'm sure that Becky will be having many good times with all concerned. Would be hot to write about the double date with Bobby and his brother. Good job
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