it's a real shame they wasted so much time when they could have been together the whole time you never get those years back. she needs to get a divorce and move in permanetly. it is rare that they kept in touch especially after getting married usually after that they drift apart and lose contact.
I wanted to give this story 4.5/5 originally due to the flow of it being a bit to fast, but overall, it was written will enough that I gave it a 5!
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Anonymous09/29/13
not good not bad
this could have been good if you had left out the cheating and if you had properly finished it. as is it is a halfassed story with not enough background or character build up a weak plot and no end. time to delete and rewrite it properly.
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Anonymous03/17/15
OK , but difficult to read
Shorten the length of your paragraphs to make reading easier. Looooooong paragraphs causes reader fatigue!
Don't pay any attention to one of the previous comments regarding 'cheating'. If Kate had been completely 'satisfied' at home, nothing would have happened.
English
Too Fast!
Every 'sex' scene just happens. No buildup. No step-by-step. It'd be MUCH better with all the intervening steps.
Beautiful
I thought it was romantic :-)
shame
it's a real shame they wasted so much time when they could have been together the whole time you never get those years back. she needs to get a divorce and move in permanetly. it is rare that they kept in touch especially after getting married usually after that they drift apart and lose contact.
I loved it
well done ,I enjoyed reading the whole story, I love happy endings .At least this chapters end any way lol
Good story
Good Story, well told. Now I wonder about my cousin...
Well done
I wanted to give this story 4.5/5 originally due to the flow of it being a bit to fast, but overall, it was written will enough that I gave it a 5!
not good not bad
this could have been good if you had left out the cheating and if you had properly finished it. as is it is a halfassed story with not enough background or character build up a weak plot and no end. time to delete and rewrite it properly.
OK , but difficult to read
Shorten the length of your paragraphs to make reading easier. Looooooong paragraphs causes reader fatigue!
Don't pay any attention to one of the previous comments regarding 'cheating'. If Kate had been completely 'satisfied' at home, nothing would have happened.
when will we get to read about the
next visit and will they end up together? I hope so.
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