Glad you have returned after your hiatus. Great story as ever. Will there be more parts? Will the moms share the boys?
I think the sister for being such a good sport should get both of the boys at the same time... a DP to show her what's in store for her when she has her own son, or sons.
I 'exploded' reading this story. Probably your best, up there with 'How Mom Made Him State Champ' series. 5/5
Cool, ur back.
Can u make one more chapter of Dad's Big Mistake? Please, Please
I'm literally shaking here! Scorching!!
Another chapter on how he plants his seed in both mom and sis!!!
Another great story. Really good to see you're back. I hope you don't go away again.
I know you said this is the full story, but I think I speak for everyone when I say MORE!
A well written and edited story that made for a smooth flowing read.
There's a lot of story yet to be told about the two families.
I feel sorry for Claire being stuck baby sitting for the clueless father, while her mom and brother are fucking their brains out.
I wonder if Claire will ever seduce her father?
The two boys could take Claire together and give her a good DP, fucking her cunt and ass at the same time.
So much kinky action could happen yet, swapping moms, doing each mom together in a threesome, and doing both moms and the sister in a free for all.
Thanks for the good read.
I loved this story,but like others have posted please write what happens to Claire. I have started to read your other stories and if they are as good as this, I gonna be reading for a while.
So many people have mentioned including the daughter on other installments (if there are any). I like your stories because they are about mom and son. Not because they are about the whole family other incestual relationships. I really don't want to read about Claire.
With that said, the hottest part of this story to me was when Kate confessed everything to Claire and then they started talking about the size of Alec's cock.
For me it's more about hearing the mom talk dirty, which seemed like there was less of in this story. Please try more of that in future stories.
I was riveted to every page! I'd love to read about Claire and maybe the moms swapping their sons!
As always, so very good.
Keep 'em coming.
A very funny and entertaining brainless sex romp, hehe. For a stroke story, it was top notch, even though the plot moved forward quite fast, considering it become to involve quite some characters. I love how you portray your big titted moms (I like them just like that, hehe). It was a pity that Clarie and Jim's storyline got concluded like that. The story left me hanging at its end, but the ride was great. It certainly shows the reason why you are one of my favourited Literotica authors. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work. I'll patiently wait for your next mother-son stories (my favourites too).
Hope continune with more chapters.or more stories like this.....
Klxro's moms go about their incestuous activities so happily care free! It was terrific to see two moms together enjoying such obscene fun. For my own taste, in addition to the sex between the moms and their sons, it would be great to read about Claire licking her mom Kate into an orgasmic frenzy!
As always, Klrxo, the rest of us can only emulate what you seem to pull off so effortlessy. I love the forward, confident moms in your stories...they know what they want and they get it! Something about the naughty texts really got to me. I love that sexy flirting under Dad's nose - it brings out the worst in my own oedipal issues...lol! Can't wait to read the next!
Thank you for sharing your talents! I really enjoy the portrayal of the father as not able to believe anything could be going on, under his own nose. Loved it in your other stories as well! Thanks again.
I began to feel as if I were reading a retelling of someones actual life. I especially found the conversations between 'Kate' and 'Claire' and that of 'Ashley' and 'Kate' to be particularly believable. Although I would like to have read more surrounding the background of "Ashley' and 'Tim', and how their relationship began, prior to reaching the campground also, similar to the way you described 'Kate and 'Alec's beginnings. Only other suggestion I would make, is one that others have already offered, that you have set the groundwork for additional chapters. I look forward to reading more. I also look forward to reading your follow-up to BSTC.
...it's a well-crafted and -written story. But I have to admit I don't find it as thrilling as either BSTC or Dad's Big Mistake. It's more realistic, but my tendencies go more toward the fantastical. Just one guy's opinion. But I'd love to see another BSTC chapter. :)
I'm giving 5 stars ( great story! All in all- don't get me wrong ) but am doing so under protest . No one but no one doles out those exquisite little details like Kl. e.g. the preliminary neck kisses on and on to the sweaty climax from story to story in this genre. It's akin to watching a master chef add pinches of exotic spices, cutting choice cuts of prime into a platter of culinary heaven on earth. In this one story the 2nd mom/son unit is superfluous. They're clones of the first set. Want to do the ultimate nasty in tandem in same time and setting. Bravo! I'm all for it but don't make one pair cookie cut from the other. The joy is in the differences. Again there's a great story here but when I save this one to puter' - all references to 2nd mom/ son will be deleted so I don't miss a stroke err beat ummm you know what I mean.
P.S. I really ,really enjoyed the wanna be sister character in terms of comic pathos. She was a great pseudo villain and as long as I'm nitpicking I only wish she had kept up her opposition for a few more chapters on terms of dramatic storyline tension was lost when she submitted 2 the 'incestual' a weee bit too soon for my personal taste. I do applaud the author for the fresh angles and eagerly await his next work.
I very much enjoyed you tale. Build up was good and the sister's involvement was hot. Looking forward to chapter 2.
A few technical quibbles - you should have had an editor check your story for spelling and grammatical errors, as well as a few consistencies.
Aside from that, VERY hot story. I can't put my finger on it, but this story brought back some old memories of when I read my first erotic story. It was a trashy x-rated novel my mom kept hidden under her dresser. I think it's the sheer, raw audacity of everybody involved, the suspicious thoughts of the father, and just epic WHAM! BAM! ending.
Your stories are all very good, we enjoyed every single one of them especially this one. Great work!
Dad and daughter's turn.
but for the technical errors.
Amazing how the two Dad's didn't have a clue. Ch 2 may have Claire exploring her Dad's ability to have special bonds with daughter.
The trip is off with a 'bang'. Hope you continue it, things like the mom's and son' swapping, Dad and Claire, what about the other dad?, the list goes on. Have the completed story checked before publishing it to catch the small inconsistencies, etc.
I'm not a grammar/spelling policeman. I did notice a couple minor name switches, but these typos are in even the most expensively proofed novels, so don't wrestle with the quibblers.
I loved this story, I was constantly hard! I would have liked some more action involving Claire in both mom's games with son and even the two bots and their mothers. But you started to lead us to conclusion that Claire was getting close to dad, maybe in next story she can take care of both dads.
I did truly appreciate your description of Kate matching your bio picture, it added to my ability to stay extremely hard and envision the view Claire and Alec had while enjoying your charms.
Fantastic story. As offered with some of the other comments made, my imagination ran away with me too. I'm seeing the mom's switching boys; Claire doing Tim, her dad, and maybe Tim's dad. Wives switching hubbies. With four men and three women, you get a lot of possibilities! And, of course, all the women get pregnant with no real clue as to who's sperm did the deed. So maybe I should stop and let you write YOUR stories! Nice Job on this story!
I've always enjoyed your stories. Thanks for sharing them.
Your stories are close to, if not indeed the hottest and the best. After I'm fairly deep into a story, I reach a spot and blow my load. Then later, read another page or so, an do it again......and again, and so on. The "How Mom Made Him State Champ," series damn near killed me.
Thanks very much and keep up the good work.
Wow, this one is just amzing and so hot and full of mutual understanding between mothers and their sons. I would be very happy if their was continuation of this story. Please think about, PLEASE!!!!
With the exception of the fact that it's hard to believe the mother's waited till th boys were 18 to start showing their affection, I really loved the story.
Fantastic story as far as it went. Is Dad just a guy that likes to dive his pickup and tell whopper fish stories? We need to get to know him too. He has to be involved with Claire!! Right??
Claire needs some cock. How about Dad's???
People need to take the good with the bad, especially when they put themselves in the limelight. I know this may or may not be fantasy, but in any case, within the first two pages it is like that story where one spouse catches the other spouse in the act of coitus with a third party and manipulates the injured party to believe it was all in their imagination. Now if you have witnesses, visual evidence, and volunteered statement from one or both of the accused are you going to take it with a grain of salt. Couldn't get passed the first two pages because the dad was played sooooo! stupid and the mother's actions sooooooo! careless and lack of empirical concern for marriage and son's ejection from home and family.
This story once again proves why you are the best author on literotica! I eagerly await more installments in your series such as BSTC but your new stories and your new characters and scenarios are so amazingly hot. So whether you continue an old story or create a new one, you seem to know exactly what to do so just keep doing it.Thank You!
I thought Claire was easily the best character here. The two best scenes here are when Mom converts her to the "dark side" and when she joins in and sucks her brother off. I know this was intended to be a one chapter story, but I've read all your stuff and I think this is your absolute best! Please write another chapter here, bro & sis have to have some time together without the parents around (what 18-20 year olds aren't trying to get away from their parents?). Don't be lazy and just get Claire involved with the Dad, he can't satisfy the Mom so just leave him as the clueless guy who almost catches everyone in the act. Alec needs to pump Claire full of cock.
I have to admit, until I reached 'page 4', my patience with wearing awfully thin---concerning Clair's attitude---- but the conversation she had with her mother ended my frustration. It turned out as I almost expected---sexy and exciting. However, Kate did take a lot of risky and foolish chances.
I expected the guys to switch, but that's what we adults are inclined to do. Young guys are so thrill to get next tio their mothers. 'switching' is a remote thought. Never the less, a damn good story!
Claire asked Her father, "Did you and grand mother have sex?" a long pause then "Daddy!" a soft "Yes!" "Well then don't you think that Mom should let Alec have sex with her?" "Damn it Claire why do you have to be so smart?" "Daddy I love you!" "I love you to Claire!" Unknown to Jim Claire moved her right bare leg to the floor when she did she also slid her skirt up above her waist then she reached out and took her father right hand that was gripping tightly to the steering wheel and now with both her hands pulled it to her crotch, as she was doing this Jim looked down and cried out, "OH MY GOD!" as he saw her bare pussy.Thinking how it was so much like Kate's when they were first married and how sexy it was? Claire pulled his hand to her opening pushing the tips of his fingers in side of her as she shook all over with a climax. Now crying hard she cried out softly, "Daddy I need you to help me to just like Alex needs mom make love to me=== PLEASE! PLEASE! Help me." This could be a new chapter by its self GREAT story most of them.
The story is awesome, but your grammar at times is bad enough that it's distracting. A few examples: the words "mom" and "dad" are only proper nouns if they're being used as a name. So in the phrase, "Hi Mom," it would be capitalized, while "Say hi to your mom," it wouldn't. Words like "brother," "sister," "sibling," etc. are never proper nouns. Also, words like "gasp," "scream," "pop," etc. don't need to be capitalized or italicized.
Okay. I love this Story. But I am not so interested in a continuation with Alec and Kate.
I want a side story continuation with Claire and Alec, Or Claire, Alec and Kate all three. There is no way that little mynx claire is gonna settle for just sucking her brother off. Come on and write a Claire & Alec Side story
YOUR STORIES HAVE BECOME A JOY TO READ, THEY ALWAYS HAVE A LITTLE TWIST TO KEEP YOU WANTING MORE. AND WE GET IT. THIS WAS SEVEN PAGES, THAT MADE ME WANT TO GO ON. BUT THE STORY ENDED. WELL ON TO THE NEXT STORY. GREAT READ AS ALWAYS ............LAROC OF AGES
I read this one back when you first published it and forgot to favorite it then. Been looking for it ever since. I love this story. Thank you for writing it.
Mom Katherine is nothing short of a carnal sexual "free-spirit". I'm not sure if the connotation of "Doe" fits Kate or not, but when she is framed as a female, or Doe, rabbit the light bulb goes off--she does have the urges to fuck like a rabbit; and depending on how rich her blood is, she could be accused of fucking like a mink!! Either way she is a non-stop hungry pussy for any cock that knows no quit.
Several times we were thrown a curve ball by the Writer having us, or myself in particular, worried and fearful this truly amazing incest story was going to stray with the inclusion of non-incestual outsiders, muddy the water so to speak or water down the incestual family with non-family partners. Gladly, that did not happen!! The simultaneous mother and their own blood-sons incestual suck, blow, eat, jack, finger and fuck sessions being side-by-side with Tim and his mother did nothing to effect nor dilute the incestual aspects of the related partners Kate and Alec. Most time threesomes or moresomes disturb the incestual balance; however, Kate's and her son Alec's inclusion of Kate's daughter/Alec's brother, Claire, into their incestual affair was ideal as a threesome because Claire is blood-related to Kate and Alec--the ideal threesome.!!
Kate is a bumblebee, humingbird bundle of energy and sexual proclivity, ever anxious to live on the edge, the greater the risk the more adrenalin her heart pumps creating a never ending cycle! Her risk-taking is a thrill to this reader although I do root for her to be successful with each of her heart-stopping endeavors!!!
A great, exciting story. The character's are all well rehearsed, vocalized and play their roles well. The Fifth-wheel road trip is a unique theme and plot. The dialogue was good, with the mother, in particular, and son's banter quite lively and refreshing!.
In the recesses of my mind I was hoping and wishing that Claire could make an incestual connect with her father (being a father who has "crossed-over" with my daughter for quite a few years before she married)!! Claire's father, Jim (Kate's husband) seemed to be wimpy-assed and had no implied interest with Claire, even though her father, Jim, gave some slight indication he and his own mother had some degree of relationship more than the normal (what is normal???) mother and son! Too bad for Claire!
just good hot sex-nicely written-thanks
Loved every delicious word of it. You my friend are a true talent with this stuff.
One of the best I've read 5 ***** . Thanks
Really hot story. I hope this is a long vacation together. It won't be fair if in the next chapter Claire and Jim can't get a little of the action and I know the women will want to switch sons. This story line can go in many directions. I gave you a 5.
Im very picky with stories when giving 5 stars but i have to say you earned mine.
Loved this story. I appreciated that it was one long story instead of smaller multiple chapters. It was hot watching the mom seduce her son and then had the daughter join in. Having the second mom there was hot, too. Five big stars.
I really wish the author would add more to it now!!! Craving more of this story!
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