All Comments on 'Obsession Ch. 01'

by NeverWinterNite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent!

Can't wait to see what Jason has Melissa do next. I'd love to see her as his personal Slut - at work, home and public. Maybe Melissa should be spanked for being no naughty at work? ;)

NeverWinterNiteNeverWinterNiteover 12 years agoAuthor
Love your ideas!!

I agree with you about her being his personal slut. I think might incorporate some of that into my story. ;)

talltales08talltales08over 12 years ago
good start

Lots of places to go, even though he seemed to get a fast start...

horny2play69horny2play69over 12 years ago

Interesting story ! I think Jason should try to get Melissa to do him and then he can slowly reveal what he saw and how horny it made him feel. Maybe, she'll like that slut role knowing he's behind the emails ?? Please keep writing. Thanks.

vmp1vmp1over 12 years ago
Positions?

Adding the relative position to someone in a nonconsent story helps. Was Bob a mailroom clerk? Her boss?

NeverWinterNiteNeverWinterNiteover 12 years agoAuthor
@vmp

Actually, Bob is a new intern at the engineering firm.

DamianShepDamianShepover 12 years ago

yes she definitely needs to become his personal slut!

texasacetexasaceover 12 years ago
You have great talent...

You write GREAT Hot porn... keep writing, and we will keep cumming... Thanks!!

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