All Comments on 'Halloween Party Sleepover'

Oh hell yeah man, bring'em on...this one was HOT!!!! Lookin forward to reading more of your adventures.

That such a piece of crap can do anything for anyone.

many misspellings and partial words run your spell checker.

I love real stories and this one feels real. PLese share more of your experiences...

I'll submit some of the other stories that go with this one. If you liked it I'm sure you will like the others - except for the folks who dint like me speling n thought it was crap.

Great job, yes I would love to hear more, she must have been a real beauty as most bi-racial ladies are, you were a lucky guy!

The plot is good, but the delivery could use some spicing up. I could see the events being developed more thoroughly, rather than being a list of events. I'm favoriting you though because I'm curious as to your other adventures!

I could enjoy it more if the sex was more drawn out and descriptive

Real stories are always the best.

Please tell more!

It waz so stupid it waz so short i got bored its a gay story

I think this is a particularly good story. I find myself thinking about the possibility of her becoming pregnant, or the inclusion of the girlfriend who likes to watch or the mother. I think maybe part of what I like is the interracial aspect, but I’d like to think that I am not a racist!