All Comments on 'Bachelor/Bacherlorette Pary'

would sure have helped

With 9 people fucking you need to take your time. This is a great scenario but it's over too quickly. Plus in a hotel there's room service so you can introduce a stranger who they can abuse in ways they mightn't do with people they know.

Was this a 750 word flash story? Just asking as it sure seemed like it. Would like to have seen more character development.