All Comments on 'Overnight Sex Change'

I like this concept. I hope you continue with the story. You could use a good editor, though, as there are lots of writing errors. But I really like where the story is going.

3 stars. Keep writing, but get an editor.

This story has a lot of ways to go.

But, I repeat what others have said. You need to get an editor. Don't trust the Spellchecker. Your mistakes make it difficult to enjoy the story.

I agree with others, an editor is needed to clean up the writing. I didn't like how abruptly it ended. I look forward to more from you.

I'm curious on where this is going.

i cant wait for the rest

great story man, i cant wait to hear some more.

That was gross and disturbing!

Great. Please write more. Is exciting

:-)

I have had this dream. If it happened to me I would be the biggest slut in the world. I would have sucked and fucked so many guys. Hundreds!!!

Yep, so that was pathetic and incomplete.

If that happened to me I would think more about getting guys up and running get my p****