All Comments on 'It's alright.'

As I'm sure you meant it to be. But I don't really see much of an "erotic" aspect to it. Some of the meter and rhyme didn't feel quite right to me on some likes ("not of their greed and their lustings." and "and why were you out in the rain?/Tomorrow you'll sniffle and cough."). Good overall though!

Yeah, it's a little rough in places, I justify that by saying that the dude's deranged and speaking this to the subject, but yeah, real reason is I couldn't find a way to put those in there and stick with the meter.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it, man, I appreciate it.

erotic does not have to be blatant to be erotic. duh!

I love it! A dark and almost scary glimpse into this kind of 'love'.