Tom's Genie Pt. 02

I'm can't wait to see what happens next.

Carry on the good work man !

Interst

It will be fun to see what happens next. I wonder if a story could be written about a man and his genie not at the first of thier relationship but perhaps near the end.....Do genies age? Or let thier Masters age? Be interesting to see. Well done and well written

Good

But a bit short

Keep going

I liked it but it was a tad short. Pretty good overall.

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because of the fact that this readers head has exploded due to the shear awesomeness of this series this comment has been censored

Great Series

I am concerned with how Tom is changing. He referred to Violet as "slave". Power corrupts, and he is losing himself. I really like your writing, and can appreciate your characters, just be careful. Thank you, looking forward to the next installment.

Good Series

I too see a sadistic side of Tom coming out. Not to fond of it. I remember the mysterious stranger who gave Tom the box, so maybe it will tie in. Violet is a sweet Genie!!!!

WTH is this?

Your last chapter was 8 pages, this one is 1 page, and half of it came from the other chapter. Who puts out a half page release and calls it Pt. 02?

he is one sick puppy

and way too warped for me.