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Temptation Castle Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/18/11

loved it :)

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by Anonymous08/18/11

disappointing

I looked forward to his trip to the dungeon, expecting a description of him being spanked or having the whip used on his buttocks. unfortunately the whole dungeon experience was glossed over in one paragraph. A major letdown.

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by sr71plt08/19/11

Leaving all of the work to me?

Disappointed anonymous doesn't want to do any of his own fantasizing? I thought I already wasn't leaving enough room for the reader to do that. Maybe I'll do a separate story on just how that night in the dungeon went. Or, just to torture you, maybe not. *smile*

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