All Comments on 'The Devil's Number'

by ZackOShea

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crazycujocrazycujoover 12 years ago
waiting is over...

i've been waiting for a story like this to come along. outstanding!

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Why thank you! I hope folks find it amusing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Most definitely an interesting story! I enjoyed the overall pace and flow of the story, as it deftly touched on all the characters -- a very nice story 'hook' indeed! Looking forward to the next installment!

PrincessFlitPrincessFlitover 12 years ago
Finally

Hot, well written and great characters. I can't wait to read more!

TarotbTarotbover 12 years ago
Great!

I LOVE gentle Succubus stories and this has just the right mix of humour and eroticism, mixed with soft domination.

Thank you.

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback!

JQTZJQTZover 12 years ago
Great Read

I loved this story. Particularly, the description of the succubus.

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you. I am glad that it tickled your fancy.

IscaaIscaaover 11 years ago
Very enjoyable

I just want to say....I enjoyed your story, its the first of its kind that I have read.

I look forward to more. Well done.

ZackOSheaZackOSheaover 11 years agoAuthor

Well thank you very much. I do appreciate the comment and that you enjoy it :)

hackman2die4hackman2die4about 9 years ago
updates?

I really enjoyed this story and would love to read the next chapter if you are still writing

ZackOSheaZackOSheaabout 9 years agoAuthor

I am still working on Demon Pi, bits and pieces. Glad that you've enjoyed it so far. but often times it keeps getting shunted on the back burner for other projects :(

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