All Comments on 'Beltane Fire'

by Morgaia

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PornguinPornguinover 12 years ago
Sheesh

You had a good story, but you prematurely ended this story. They have barely started having sex and you ended. I was digging it until then.

MorgaiaMorgaiaover 12 years agoAuthor

I plan to add a second chapter so check back to look for it! :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Great tale!

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