All Comments on 'Negotiating My Prenuptial Agreement'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
GREAT!

I love this story! Please write more with these characters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I'd like more

You hinted in your Halloween story that Brittany was married with a great prenup, but I'd like to read more- maybe a story about the honeymoon?

AMoveableBeastAMoveableBeastalmost 11 years ago

A very clever story. I have a weakness for manipulative women, and this story satisfied that appetite quite nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Character

A great main character with a devilish dark side. A lot of directions this all can go should you decide to proceed.

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 9 years ago
Hilarious! Any chance of an epilogue? Like these characters...

Wish I had been there to watch this one. Would make a great Cinemax short film. Great story!

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 9 years ago
hmmm.....

But should need arise he may find a hit-man more affordable.

That's the trouble with backing someone into a corner, when you leave them no other choice but fight dirty they will.

Treachery this early is not a positive sign for the future chances of them staying together.

She gets the gold mine, he gets the shaft.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fun Story

She plays the 'underestimate me at your peril card' well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fun Fantasy

This is a fun story with fun characters. Wonder how Brittany is getting on these days?!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Tit-illating story about three whores

Women are whores. Here's another story showing how easy it is for a woman to sell her body to get something she wants. My daughter knew very well at age 16 how to get favors with nothing more than a smile and a wiggle. My wife gets warnings for speeding all the time, rarely a ticket. Helps to have impressive boobs.

R.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yeah dream on

💣

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Silly joke

No guy would ever sign that pre-nup.

1 star

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesover 2 years ago

I enjoyed this story.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

More silly than funny.

imhaplessimhaplessalmost 2 years ago

Totally sick and ridiculous -- so why did I give it a 5? I guess I was manipulated as much as James was (lol).

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A story about a woman that no-one should marry.

Obviously, the lawyer and the boyfriend had to be naive, socially inept, and as worldly as a devoted Hamish child for any of this too work.

But the killer of the story was the wife: dishonest, manipulative, and willing to use sex to get what she wants in the material realm.

That's the definition side of the equation sorted.

So if that's the definition, what's the word that needed defining?

Oh. Yes....

Whore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I know a lot of guys but I don't know anyone that deaf, dumb and blind. Stupid

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 1 year ago

LOL good work "girls"

Bill669JBill669Jabout 1 year ago

5 stars for originality. Very funny and intertwining. Fun to read

DazzyDDazzyD5 months ago

Great story! Staff like this happens to me all the time! Life isgood!

DD

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

On page one. Just glad to see someone finally got fiance and fiancee right.

JPB

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