Running the Hills Ch. 03

HOT DAM,!!!!

WOW! This chapter left me breathless, I needed a cold shower. This played out like watching a video in slow motion, fuckin' FANTASTIC! But the real kicker was that last sentence "I heard the front door open downstairs, and Shannon’s footsteps as she came in.". Can't wait for the fireworks to go off! :)

Oh damn...

lol, you did *not* just end it there!!! Oh lord, it's about to hit the fan. LOL, then again, maybe not :) can't wait for the next chapter. And I agree, that scene was very well described ;)

Oh my goodness...

That was amazingly hot, crap every time I leave you a comment I am forced to rely on adverbs...bad commenter. Every chapter is better and better. I can only echo the sentiments of everyone else. There are only a handful of writers who can draw the reader in as well as you do. I can't wait of for the next chapter.

Peace and joy,
Shell

Congrats.

You writing just gets better and better. great Job

and your rapid fire posting of chapters must be commended. That's the way to write a serial story. Keep em hard and hungry for more.

OH FUCK

Feel like i have just taken that load, I came with you.
One of the best, how are you going to beat that??.

Wow!

You leave me panting for more. Great story!

Another fantastic chapter

I commented on the last chapter about how unusual it is for a 30 year old man to suddenly realize he's gay, then I realized I am a 50 year old (married) woman who's suddenly realized she's most definitely bi. LOL! It happens!

Wonderful story. Very well-told. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

It just gets better and better!

I have become such a fan of your writing, please keep 'em coming! Literally! LOL!

Can't wait for the next instalment.

Please write another story. I am utterly hooked!

Convinced Me

Not that I needed much. That was really, really hot. You have me so horny!

Curse the back button...

My comment for this chapter accidentally posted on ch 2. Great job.

Where is Chapter 4?!?!?! :)

Some of the best pieces I've read on here ever.

More

More more more :)

more

You have to tell us the rest of the story although we can guess what the ending is!

This is HOT!

Seriously! One page per chapter for three chapters of such hot action is not enough. That's like one brokendown chapter to me. Ditch the gf and wife and continue the story, please please.

So Sexy .... So Hot

I love this story. Feeds my fantasy life with lots of lust. I want a man to help me, take me, make me his as Mike does here. Keep writing. I love it.