All Comments on 'Living with Elise Ch. 01'

you got a nice set up going. but you need to find a more clever way to end the chapters if they are going to be this short. keep it going i want to see where this will go

Ready for chapter 2, hope its longer.. Very good start though!

Do you just like to torture your readers? If not more chapters would be a good way to make it up to us.

This was so good!! Finally, good writing about a girlfriend cheating on her boyfriend with his brother!!

10 years ago??? No comment.,