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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Bravo!

Incredibly well written. A picture book, painted with words!

papagrizpapagrizover 12 years ago
EXCELLENT STORY AND VERY WELL WRITTEN

You have the marvelous ability to make the story take on a life. I really enjoyed reading it and hope it will be continued.

Harper2Harper2over 12 years ago
Well Done!

What finely drawn characters.You really brought them to life on the page, in creating a story that was believable and enjoyable. Well done!

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Beautiful, Hot, Sweet, Creamy

Well-written. Will have a few quibbles via "Send Feedback," but a fine effort.

bluewillybluebluewillyblueover 12 years ago
What a wonderful story!

Enjoyed the general story and the characters as much if not more than the erotic portion.

Great job, looking forward to chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Very Pleasant. Not an unexpected result

jntiquesjntiquesabout 7 years ago

Dear Author, This was an excellent love story filled with great characterizations and a

very fine plot. Well written but unfortunately, not completed. Why have you ceased production on Literotica? Unfortunate! Thank you for the read and for the trip you took me on. A strong five! jntiques

JSipesJSipesabout 6 years ago
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You need to give us more of your talent. I enjoy your stories very much.

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