by melbclayman
You have the marvelous ability to make the story take on a life. I really enjoyed reading it and hope it will be continued.
What finely drawn characters.You really brought them to life on the page, in creating a story that was believable and enjoyable. Well done!
Well-written. Will have a few quibbles via "Send Feedback," but a fine effort.
Enjoyed the general story and the characters as much if not more than the erotic portion.
Great job, looking forward to chapter 2.
Dear Author, This was an excellent love story filled with great characterizations and a
very fine plot. Well written but unfortunately, not completed. Why have you ceased production on Literotica? Unfortunate! Thank you for the read and for the trip you took me on. A strong five! jntiques