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Bravo!
Incredibly well written. A picture book, painted with words!
EXCELLENT STORY AND VERY WELL WRITTEN
You have the marvelous ability to make the story take on a life. I really enjoyed reading it and hope it will be continued.
Well Done!
What finely drawn characters.You really brought them to life on the page, in creating a story that was believable and enjoyable. Well done!
Beautiful, Hot, Sweet, Creamy
Well-written. Will have a few quibbles via "Send Feedback," but a fine effort.
What a wonderful story!
Enjoyed the general story and the characters as much if not more than the erotic portion.
Great job, looking forward to chapter 2.
Very Pleasant. Not an unexpected result
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