Gargouille Ch. 04

Love it!!! 5 stars for this

I check every day for an update..and i was happy when i saw one as posted. Poor Nicole..or should i say luck Nicole. Two hot men wanting her ass so badly..lol. I love how the story is progressing. Can't wait for chap 5. Nicole is one luck bitch.

It was so worth the wait. Thank you so very much. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

*****

Well done, again.

Five.

Had to go back and read it all!

Wonderful story with a good pace and fun plot. I found this and had to go read all of it. Excellent, please continue! DW

5:)

Hope there is more as soon a spossible.

I can't wait to find out what a gargoyle is in your story.

We know that the Lairds are both very big men, and that their eyes go red when they're enraged...but the full details are doubtless yet to come. (As it were!)

Thanks for sharing this enthralling tale.

O My Gosh

that was freakin hot. Mmmmmm, I just lovvve a domineering man. lol Your story is most excellent. This is great, the flow, the detail, the characters, the hottness!!! I can't wait until you update again. This was worth the wait, more please and soon
Thank you for the read
Shanee

WOW

I want a Eyon of my own!!!! Next chapter please!!! SOON!! =^_^= PK

What an ending!!

I loved this chapter it was informative and hot. Man and to think this was mainly one on one Eyon and Nicole....Its going to be explosive when it's all three of them. So you know I'm jonesing for an update for sure now. lol keep it commin

Mad, Sell off, tun-up

OMG!!! I can't want to hear more about Kieran. Chap. 4 is well detailed, and I'm loving it, enjoyed every word. Chapter 5 please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

All four chapters were freaky good. I love it! Please continue don't give up this is one best story on this site.

Thank you readers

I just want to thank all the readers for their lovely feedbacks. I always re-read them for inspiration as well as support, to continue with this story. I am new to this and am learning every day. I remember my first submission,it was a bleeding mess..lol, but readers were encouraging.

Thanks for both the private/public comments. And thanks to my editor Angelicsounds.

I say, great

Chapter 5 please.

we need more

I like well actually love and would like you to finish it

Please don't make us wait another 2 months for the next chapter? I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! :))))))))))))

What's going on so far.

Hiya everyone,

Just to keep you all in the loop. So sorry chapter 5 is taking so long. Chapters five & six are with my editor, as soon as i get them i'll post to LitE. Also i am almost finished with 7 & 8, just adding some bits and pieces, so readers won't have to wait too long in between.

Thank you ever so much for reading my story. Cheers

I can't wait till you post the next chapters :D

Waiting

I hope that the New Year will bring other chapters.

Very good

I hope there will be much more of this! I hope you will include a description of your gargoyles soon.

Hurry up please!

I check almost every day for chap 5. Please..please update.

i still hope

she busts some nuts in the near future to deflate some egos which these lairds obviously have planet-sized ones...

An update

Hiya

Sorry for the long wait. But just to let you all know that chp 5 will be send off to LitE any day now. Thanks for your support, by taking the time to read my story and giving feedbacks

Cheers

So...

She just forgets about her life now? They don't care about her feelings or whether she wants to stay? Just sex and she will be a great mom?

Good but...

there are many details that don't work: for instance the fact that she stays at their place for a whole week or so and there is no news about her work, she doesn't even think about it. Also how come she has clothes with her. Is it her clothes of what? And she doesn't even try to leave? So the sex scene is good, can't wait for the 3some, but the story would be better if all the details and little thing were explained. As for now, it put you out of the story a little...

this is very familiar

Umm, this story seems familiar... I've read a series by nia k. foxx on Gargoyles starting around 2006 to about 2013; that mate with black women who are attracted to them, yet reluctant. No offense, but it's obvious you are a huge fan of the series. I will consider it a compliment that you are attempting to continue the series with a different twist to novel idea.