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The Summer of '78

byKaramazov©
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by tobytim08/27/11

Good

This short story is definately a turn on,, but why stop when the weekend has only just started.
What happened after dinner,,, end is dissapointing

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by William smyth08/27/11

I'm disappointed too

but only because the opening paragraph of this superb story describes it as a one time happening, precluding a sequel. At any rate, I hope this first time author is already working on another story for our pleasure.
This one shows that he has real talent.

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by Karamazov08/27/11

There is certainly more to come, so please stay tuned...

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by Anonymous08/27/11

MMMMM Good

This was a great story even if predictable. Perhaps that is why it was so well done. It certainly was a MOVING story to me.

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by bluewillyblue08/28/11

Great first story

Really enjoyed looking forward to chapter 2

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by Anonymous08/28/11

More to come?

The author stated that it was a one-time thing, then certainly the story ended there. If there's more to come, then I assume more fictional stories. If that's the case, then I don't believe this story to be true at all. However, it's a very good first story, albeit a little too short for my taste. Maybe the author can edit the story by removing the first paragraph, that way we all can look forward to what happened next because this story is just too good to end the way it did.

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by Karamazov08/28/11

Yes, more to come

Thank you all for your kind and insightful comments. You have inspired me to accelerate the next installment of this tale. This being my maiden voyage on Lit.,
I am not 100% sure how things are done. Bear with me as I find my way.

Many thanks-

-K

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by frind08/28/11

Great story!!

Great story!! We're waiting to find out what happens after they go into the house!!

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by digdaddyrich09/02/11

A very good start

The young stud needs to be more demanding of his mother, and get between her legs and into her pussy.

A good read, thanks

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by hornacek09/03/11

dick shape

"The base was pretty normal, but it grew in girth toward the head like an ice cream come."

I love when stories ignore basic biology, or the laws of physics.

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