All Comments on 'Josh's Journal Ch. 02'

i wish you would make your chapters longer....

More really soon please!

please stop teasing us with these short chapters D:

I really enjoy the "journal" concept. This story is exciting so far and has so much potential. Can't wait for more chapters.

Awesome story! I like the journal cOncept, it makes it a little bit mOre personal but less personal as well. Its weird, I can't explqin it but its pretty good.

however your spelling is bad. your words are jumbled.. i think you need to either get an editor or lern to type better..... sorry

CRANK IT UP.? BEFORE I GO TO SLEEP

Ah, a typical dinkyboots comment!

Glad you're gone with your horrible "criticism"! Imagine telling the writer that they can't type while you also don't know the concept of three dots as an ellypsis, capitalizing the words after a perod and typing "lern" properly.