A few little errors here and there. Not your usual perfection and made for an uneven read of your story. But the content was excellent and again I await your next submission....pun intended.
I re-read my story and see what you mean. I think, now that I am finally sharing these things, I may be too anxious to get them out. I probably need to slow down a little and pay more attention to the writing. This has been like some kind of catharsis for me, finally telling. I don't think I ever thought many people would want to read about me, and now I suddenly realize some people DO! And I should be more careful about it.
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A few little errors here and there. Not your usual perfection and made for an uneven read of your story. But the content was excellent and again I await your next submission....pun intended.
Hmmm
I re-read my story and see what you mean. I think, now that I am finally sharing these things, I may be too anxious to get them out. I probably need to slow down a little and pay more attention to the writing. This has been like some kind of catharsis for me, finally telling. I don't think I ever thought many people would want to read about me, and now I suddenly realize some people DO! And I should be more careful about it.
Kisses, and thank you.
Charlotte
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I eagerly await your next submission..pun intended!
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Please releas more soon
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