All Comments on '1, 2, 3.. As Easy as ABC Ch. 05'

by boo_dreaux

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 12 years ago
Damn,

I love your writing.

tndrsoulxxtndrsoulxxover 12 years ago
Never got that in college

Even in an all girl school, never got that opportunity. wish I had a teacher like you. Maybe then I wouldn't be a horney unfulfilled woman.

some day, I know I'll feel the the soft arms of a woman encircling me from behind, nuzzeling my neck and teaching me the bliss that is love between women.

Excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Dreamy

Loved the description of Soo. Made me envious of Tess. Love them Eastern native women. Beautiful creation truly enjoy reading your work.

Lions86Lions86over 2 years ago

i know im way late on this and it doesnt make a difference now, but i feel like you use the persons name too often, when you could just say she or her. there were some times when you would use soo or tess' name 5 or 6 times one after the other when you could have used she or her sometime

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