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Melanie Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Dryhill09/17/11

GREAT CHAPTER

A wonderful ending to the story, or is it the end? Thank you for anoither great read.

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by spankfunfor09/07/13

Mistress Sandy!

Sandy set all three :slaves free and took their trainer along with them. Roberta actually had become the trainers' slave by choice. Sandy set the FBI on to everyone else involved in the slave trade business. Most had enough money to get themselves out of most any trouble, but, it would slow them down for awhile. Very erotic toward the last three chapters.Another story about what happened to them would be great!!

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