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Adventure On The Open Water

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by RDean08/25/11

Good read

I have little to say critically about this piece, it was very well written, the action started right away, there were no major tangents or inconsitencies, and there was tension between charaters. the sexual content was thrilling, I like stories where the couple could get caught, I like to write about adultry or other risky sex myself. Thank You for the effort put into this.

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by Anonymous09/10/11

A little jump from 3rd to first person in the beginning, but overall it was cute, well written and a nice story.

Good sex.

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