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A Grief Continued

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by zephozone12/14/11

Wonderfully surreal. . .

Amazing writing, elegant, economic. An aching sadness salved by the aching beauty of a silent fall of nowhere feathers. . . Loved it! Well done, s.s.

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by tazz31706/19/12

GRIEF AND MOURNING TIME

affects us all differently. TK U MLJ LV NV

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