Loaning My Husband to My BFF

wow

speaking of being put on the wrong foot. I thought it would be a story of love and unselfish sharing, but ... didn't like your ending. Sorry

Loved the ending

I thought the ending was great. What a surprise

didnt see it coming

Interesting turn of events. So the pain and desire was not for her husband at all.

Cool

Nice surprise ending.

I FUCKING HATED IT

I've been reading stories here for several years. I try to vote on all of them. Until now I have never given a single story a one vote.
Not only did I not find the snuff erotic I was physically and mentally repulsed.
While I respect your right to write what you want I also have the right to hate it and so vote.

snuff should be banned, not posted here

Awful, sick, not realistic at all. I understand jealousy, but no one gets aroused then turns the arousal into murder except for psychopaths. You are very very sick, get help.

Very weird

As I read this, I realized how sick the story seems to be. For those of you who have a taste for violence imposed on unwiling others, have at it. I find it macabre to say the least.

sick

next time I need a cock-wilting experience, I'll think of this story... but that's not why I show up here.

Find another line of work

this one is not going to work out

Thanks

I have to admit, I really do appreciate the feedback, both positive and negative.
Sorry to break it to you folks that don't have the stones to leave feedback with your name attached, but not every story needs to be about 40DD boobs and 9" cocks.
Personally, I think the story did what I wanted it to do, proven by the fact that the ending evoked enough emotion in people to actually comment on it. If it's not to your taste, sorry about that.

this one...

...pretty much sucked... could have been a great story, actually started out as a great story, but you just don't do that to your readers.

NICE Twist!

I, for one, thought the story was great! The ending goes against the formula so prevalent in most of the stories on Literotica, "Girl meets girl, shares her boy, everyone gets off, and lives happily ever after". It almost gets boring after the sex.

This story, while not necessarily the best masturbation material, was different and while I realize that knifing the one you love is not only unlawful, it's just plain bad form, it does not invalidate the story in any way! NICELY DONE, Ebolaone!

~Pirette

Erotic, but mis-categorized

Try Erotic Horror, not Exhibitionist. Strange twist to be sure.

oiy

I was seriously enjoying this... and then the end came. While I felt horror, I also felt and understood the pain. But why kill just him? She gave them both permission.
It was thought provoking, esp because I have been contimplating a threesome with my married bffs. Not to sure about it now lol! Randomely strange, yet uncomfortably real. Verdict? I like it!
oh and if you are not a literotica user (like me) then you can leave a comment anonymous. So don't hold it against me :)

was enjoying until the knife. it should be under erotic horror

Appalling

Such an appalling lurch in story at end. Quite disjointed, shocking and destructive

Absolutely disgusting and terrible.

This story is the absolute worst story I've ever read on this site. If there were negative ratings, that's what you would get. To trick the readier in such a manner is unforgiveable. You are no writer. I recommend you stop now. This type of gore may have an audience, but I have no idea where you would find the few people who like this crap! I realize everyone has a right to their own twisted thinking, but you should warn the reader in the beginning of the type of "story" that you have written. I have never been so turned off by a story in my entire life. What's the opposite of erotic? This is!

Fancy yourself a twist writer eh?

Well didn't see that cumming

Horrifying

I have to agree with the comments before me.

There may be an audience for this type of story, but this is not the right forum. It's pretty distressing to read that ending.

As a reader, I feel jilted, used and sick. You've made a bad choice here.

What a Farce

How the Hell did this story get into this category. Someone's sick humour. Ebalaone fuck off out of this category and take your crap to the horror section