Y E S, This Was A Sexcitingly Beautiful Story.
I Loved The Fact That Both Casey & Tash Had
Their First Lesbian Sexual Expierence.
A Follow Up Would Be Great !
Kisses
1. Spell check and proof read. There are way too many errors in here.
2. Casey says that she hadn't been with another girl for a very long time, then at the end says it was her first time. Which is it?
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Anonymous08/27/11
very good
This was a very good story please write more. But just some advice, use spell check or have someone read over it and edit it for you. Also to BonoVox99 if you had read the story correctly and paid attention you would know that she said she had only kissed another girl and done some fondling, not had sex, therefore it was her first time.
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Anonymous08/27/11
very erotic
very good all I can say is Encore!!!! Encore!!!! give me a follow up!!!! but edit and proofread before you submit
Thank you everyone for your wonderful words of support. It really means a lot to me.
In regards to the many mistakes in this story, I do apologise, and thank everyone who has brought them to my attention. I wrote this story a few years ago, and recently came across it on my computer and decided to submit it. I thought it was all ready to go, but obviously I was wrong. I am fixing the mistakes now, but it normally takes a few days for Literotica to process edit requests. Hopefully it won't take too long.
English
Nicely done
Very sweet. Will there be a follow up? Great characters
Casey's Night Of Sexual Bliss
Y E S, This Was A Sexcitingly Beautiful Story.
I Loved The Fact That Both Casey & Tash Had
Their First Lesbian Sexual Expierence.
A Follow Up Would Be Great !
Kisses
Lovely story
Very hot and electric but two things stand out.
1. Spell check and proof read. There are way too many errors in here.
2. Casey says that she hadn't been with another girl for a very long time, then at the end says it was her first time. Which is it?
very good
This was a very good story please write more. But just some advice, use spell check or have someone read over it and edit it for you. Also to BonoVox99 if you had read the story correctly and paid attention you would know that she said she had only kissed another girl and done some fondling, not had sex, therefore it was her first time.
very erotic
very good all I can say is Encore!!!! Encore!!!! give me a follow up!!!! but edit and proofread before you submit
From the Author
Thank you everyone for your wonderful words of support. It really means a lot to me.
In regards to the many mistakes in this story, I do apologise, and thank everyone who has brought them to my attention. I wrote this story a few years ago, and recently came across it on my computer and decided to submit it. I thought it was all ready to go, but obviously I was wrong. I am fixing the mistakes now, but it normally takes a few days for Literotica to process edit requests. Hopefully it won't take too long.
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