I think I'll have trouble reconciling the fact that he slapped her when he should have understood a bit more of how she felt even if he knew he had to consummate the marriage. But then he did try to make it easier on her by trying to get her excited. I don't know if I can like his character yet. Interested to see more of this story assuming that you continue it despite not calling this chapter 1.
Chapters need to be longer though.
luv it! more please
Please continue with this story..would love to see longer chapters. Loved it
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