Well its your good old basick' '' & that's the way it is" JPB story . Do you like it? Hate it? Doesn't matter. Cause' Bob doesn't care either way. I guess I like it
myself but not overmuch. Maybe I'm wrong but I think he can write ones like this while consuming cruller and morning coffee . Personally I always have time to read his new submission. You never know when he writes something along the order of ' The Next One' series or ' Susan Jones' .
Of course, neither of the principals are likable, she is a stupid slut and he is a hopeless wimp, though not of the type who sits in the closet watching....
Still well written and no where as disgusting as many of the cuckold stories on this site...
Not only does JPB not give a fuck what others think, I don't give a fuck what others think. The arrogance of people thinking they 'know' what everybody would do under different circumstances astounds me.
The husband decided early on in high school he was willing to put up with Bev's screwing around as long as it was discrete and did until she did the 'in your face' number. Then he said, "No more." He set the rules for the marriage going forward. Doesn't sound like a wimp to me. A wimp has come to mean on Lit a husband who doesn't kick his wife to the curb for whatever reason, just like a slut is a woman who even thinks about an affair.
The wankers who read authors knowing they are going to have in them relationships where the husband forgives the wife's indescretion and then lambast the authors and make remarks about them personally -- well, I have found that those who protest too much are actually doing what they protest. Check out the super "moral" religious nuts -- Baker, Robertson, etc. -- were doing what they loudly protested.
Good story, good read. Different and interesting. Thank you JRB
You tell a good story but the ending sucks! Give the guy some balls already.
Your guy is not a man. I gave you a 3 only because most of the story was
Ok. But you had to trash the ending. It just sucked!!!!!
Big surprise… Yet an other mindless and spineless cuckold story by JPB. What guy would knowingly accept being cuckolded for years and do nothing about it? And then after reaching the limit, acquiescing in it anyway… As to her changing: a leopard cannot change its spots. Given her proclivities, it's even miraculous he fathered his children and not one of her lovers.
So in future, please give your characters more (moral) backbone.
Whether or not he stayed with her was going to be up to JPB to decide. This time he decided to write another "wimp husband/ cuckold" story. As others have said, JPB doesn't give a flying fuck what his audience thinks about his storylines.
In these types of stories, I can never find any of the characters worth caring about. It's difficult to like a story if you don't have sympathy for any of the characters.
But I will probably read the next JPB story anyway...
Beverly is a despicable, manipulative, slut. She proudly describes how she is abusing her marriage. Just reading her history made me feel slimy.
But it turns out that hubby isn't quite as clueless as she thought. He split the difference between love and respect and sex. He figured that as long as he had the love and respect the sex wasn't a deal breaker. The fallacy with the story is that it is obvious from Beverly's own words that she doesn't really respect him. He was a usable fool.
And he still is although in a stronger position. Now he gets whatever sex he wants from her. I guess his justification is valid. He put up with her screwing others for many years. If that is continuing why would it be a problem now? I don't think most men would accept such a situation but the story clearly shows he will and why. OK. It's also a true observation that you will do stupid things for love. But if I were him I'd be enjoying my trips out of town a whole lot more. I would also keep up that private account and make it known to dear Beverly that she might be disposable.
Having read and looking forward to exploring your imagination I made several efforts to be positive and grade well this offering. Yet it reminds me of a burnt offering, and is non recoverable for this reader. In the future I will yet seek out to peruse your efforts but not dismiss a misguided attempt to reinterpret the rather loosely define boundaries of love and marriage where you popped the rubber band and burnt the offering.
As written it is Ok. I don't think the relationship has a chance in hell of lasting. Now that they both acknowledge who she is she will screw up again and get caught again... game over. IMHO that is what I see in the odds.
Size14Shoe and Fregen have it right. The naties among the anonymatii have no gripe; they know exactly what they are getting with JPB and they still read his stuff--religiously! I have never been able to figure that out, I mean why the blasters even open his stories, or anybody's stories when they absolutely know, or almost, that they are going to be irritated, frustrated, and emotionally castrated.
I saw the story as very good. The ending was a bit of a surprise, but that said, JPB has had other stories, among his 700 posted, that have somewhat similar outcomes. I read them all, and some of them a number of times; he is always entertaining and that's what this site--for me--is about.
This is a nicely constructed, crafted story. JPB is a master, regardless of what certain readers think about the characters. Size14Shoe hit the nail on the head with his comments.
When there is no one of value in a story it is likely a just plane bobbie non-original self cuck wimp male humiliation story.
bobbie will never understand that subject trumps talent so he just wimps on down the slippery fetish road with his helpless self cucksters watching their ho's fuck others.
Sure he has a minor following who share his male humiliation self disrespect fetish but they the few are also jaded sicko's { like Matt }.
So bobbie here's another 1 score only because a zero isn't a negative.
"Lifeisreality" has it wrong. JPB has a huge following. I have no idea how many of his stories habve been downloaded, but there is no doubt that it is one very big number. I have maybe fifty whole stories published(compared to Bob's 700) and I am working on four million between SOL and LIT. I can't even imagine what Bob's numbers must be.
The reality is that it is the religious nuts and the nagging nabobs of negativeism that are small in number.
1. In the elder generation there are big women surplus because we men died earlier than the women. Bev finds herself alone for her old ages, few old widower/divorced men want a mate who is slut.
2. Bev is lucky because the common children were DNA test proof.
3. I undarstand Rob until his DNA test proof children went away from home remained as a cuckold half wimpy husband to grow up his common children. HOWEVER IT IS THE RIGHT TIME AND HE COULD CHANGE HIS WOMAN. Brandy told him she could wait for him after the divorce!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4. My problem JPB that is he writes almost his all stories without epiloge and THIS STORY GOT A SHORT EPILOGE. I will say with Emile Zola J' accous....JPB to gave up his custom!
From this short epiloge I and others can not imagine Rob to leave Bev. Here the happy endig would have been a new connection for Rob with Brandy!!!!!!
5. For the other commenters, I think JustPlainBob's ARS POETICA is a excellent story, which I offer for everybody who tries to read a JPB's story! The title is: "Older Sluts".
6. JPB's has excellent revenge stories without any epiloge.
Where was the "love" she confessed in the words written from her POV? Obviously, she felt nothing but contempt for her husband! Does he really trade in the end "staying with her" against "swallowing" and "ass"? For him, it is obviuosly also "just sex". Such characters in a story are not my cup of tea...
2*
Some JPB's story were finished by other writers. It would be interesting against the short epiloge somebody will write a sequel where Rob will change his wife to Brandy.
well he got a slut, knew she was one and was happy finally getting what every other man who fucked her got, and it only took him 29+ years and they all got it in under a week.
wow. are well at lest he had his children by her and that all he seamed to care about.
You tale all the words in this story and rearrange them,,,,, they make a good story. Otherwise they are circling the bowl. Keep smiling Everyone we're only
Sleeping
This is one where I have to accept the guy is pretty spineless -
He hates what she does but accepts it because she says she needs it - nothing more - sorry no good - even with the new conditions his acceptance of her reality does not cut it for me.
That said the story is well constructed and nicely written - I enjoyed the reading of it - thanks -
The author has been writing stories where the male more often than not behaves like a wimp. In short the author loves wimps. Thus it is surprising to see him being one of the most popular authors out there. What does that mean? All the men or a majority of them on this site are wimps? If you are a real man you cannot love this shit. Period. 1 star rating from me.
If you're going to write a wimp husband story, couldn't he at least have enough backbone to get some strange himself. I mean, damn! Who needs a whore wife?
the wimps says blah blah blah ...and then ..and then .. the bitch says blah blah blah and then that both say blah blah blah blah...hahhahahaahaha and get this it is supposed to be sexy or maybe realistic with meaningful content...hahaha Miss JPB you one funny crazy bitch. I gotta go tell the real human's this story they will bust a gut.
You cannot love a person that treats you like shit. You can be obsessed with them due to some kind of insecurity, but that is not love. Love is an act. It is a verb. It is something a person DOES. It actually is a choice. To Love someone means that you think about how to improve their life. It means you say and do things that improve their life. It is not normal to love someone who is mistreating you. In fact it is self destructive to exist in a relationship with a person who is hurting you. You must get away from that person. There is no changing that person, they are fucked up. Just get away and find one of the many people that you can share a healthy, cooperative relationship with.
an wimp, cockold story JPB? really? most corporations have morality clauses, she and her execs could lose their jobs.. she continued to cheat, yes, he stayed? why? the ending was proof, no respect and never will be.. She now knows his stash now try hiding it from lawyers now stupid.
Love is caring for another person. Spousal love is caring for your mate as much as you care for yourself. It certainly means putting your marriage well ahead of your lust and ego. So, she didn't love him, she never did. She took advantage of his love for her. His love warped into something more like obsession in his willingness to overlook her cheating. So, again - not love - pure pathology.
I see why the average star rating is relatively lower for this story. It appeared that he had grown a pair when he moved out of the MBR and started divorce plans. Applying the "would I be happier with her in my life or happier with her out of my life" test, he (but not I) might think it was a toss-up. Maybe he should first ask the barmaid how she feels about swallowing and anal.
Ok, so you say to yourself I love her and want her in my life so what will I put up with...
And then you say too freaking bad. How delusional will I have to be to convince myself that I'm happier with her screwing around and in my life than with her NOT in my life.
Being miserable WITH her feels like the way a dog must feel when you come home after being away all day but even worse because you'd KNOW it.
English
Isn't this how they do it in Europe?
Well its your good old basick' '' & that's the way it is" JPB story . Do you like it? Hate it? Doesn't matter. Cause' Bob doesn't care either way. I guess I like it
myself but not overmuch. Maybe I'm wrong but I think he can write ones like this while consuming cruller and morning coffee . Personally I always have time to read his new submission. You never know when he writes something along the order of ' The Next One' series or ' Susan Jones' .
gave it a 3 because it's JPB
JPB, he wimped out, there is no way in hell he would stay. But from how he sounded, he's a wimp.
SEX IS NEVER THAT GOOD
for a partner to put up with untold years of disrespect and adultery. TK U MLJ LV NV
JPB-All your themes are predictable and pathetic.
You are really into cuckolding and wimp husbands. Says "tons" about you personally.
Readable Story
Of course, neither of the principals are likable, she is a stupid slut and he is a hopeless wimp, though not of the type who sits in the closet watching....
Still well written and no where as disgusting as many of the cuckold stories on this site...
Me think thou protest too much
Not only does JPB not give a fuck what others think, I don't give a fuck what others think. The arrogance of people thinking they 'know' what everybody would do under different circumstances astounds me.
The husband decided early on in high school he was willing to put up with Bev's screwing around as long as it was discrete and did until she did the 'in your face' number. Then he said, "No more." He set the rules for the marriage going forward. Doesn't sound like a wimp to me. A wimp has come to mean on Lit a husband who doesn't kick his wife to the curb for whatever reason, just like a slut is a woman who even thinks about an affair.
The wankers who read authors knowing they are going to have in them relationships where the husband forgives the wife's indescretion and then lambast the authors and make remarks about them personally -- well, I have found that those who protest too much are actually doing what they protest. Check out the super "moral" religious nuts -- Baker, Robertson, etc. -- were doing what they loudly protested.
Good story, good read. Different and interesting. Thank you JRB
Forget the subject matter
It's just a poorly written story.
Wimp!
You tell a good story but the ending sucks! Give the guy some balls already.
Your guy is not a man. I gave you a 3 only because most of the story was
Ok. But you had to trash the ending. It just sucked!!!!!
As usual: lack of a backbone
Big surprise… Yet an other mindless and spineless cuckold story by JPB. What guy would knowingly accept being cuckolded for years and do nothing about it? And then after reaching the limit, acquiescing in it anyway… As to her changing: a leopard cannot change its spots. Given her proclivities, it's even miraculous he fathered his children and not one of her lovers.
So in future, please give your characters more (moral) backbone.
bad
The guy shoud've taken on a lover at least since his wife's doing the same damn thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Not so, justplainjoe
Read JPB's "The Crumpled Letter."
This one - not as good.
But JPB - love him, hate him or just soso - puts his stories here on a continuing basis. Your choice to read or not.
Thanks for sharing, JPB.
I gave you a 3 also because I kept on reading AFTER I decided I did not like either of those two----otherwise a 1.
Yeah, I have to agree
Even though I have a happy ending in most of my stories, this guy was just a total whimp.
I was hoping for the "Barb Cheated" scenario.
Whether or not he stayed with her was going to be up to JPB to decide. This time he decided to write another "wimp husband/ cuckold" story. As others have said, JPB doesn't give a flying fuck what his audience thinks about his storylines.
In these types of stories, I can never find any of the characters worth caring about. It's difficult to like a story if you don't have sympathy for any of the characters.
But I will probably read the next JPB story anyway...
Typical JPB
Beverly is a despicable, manipulative, slut. She proudly describes how she is abusing her marriage. Just reading her history made me feel slimy.
But it turns out that hubby isn't quite as clueless as she thought. He split the difference between love and respect and sex. He figured that as long as he had the love and respect the sex wasn't a deal breaker. The fallacy with the story is that it is obvious from Beverly's own words that she doesn't really respect him. He was a usable fool.
And he still is although in a stronger position. Now he gets whatever sex he wants from her. I guess his justification is valid. He put up with her screwing others for many years. If that is continuing why would it be a problem now? I don't think most men would accept such a situation but the story clearly shows he will and why. OK. It's also a true observation that you will do stupid things for love. But if I were him I'd be enjoying my trips out of town a whole lot more. I would also keep up that private account and make it known to dear Beverly that she might be disposable.
Mmmmmmmm
Great way to end the week with a J P B story. Thank you.
Reinterpretation of love, marriage
Having read and looking forward to exploring your imagination I made several efforts to be positive and grade well this offering. Yet it reminds me of a burnt offering, and is non recoverable for this reader. In the future I will yet seek out to peruse your efforts but not dismiss a misguided attempt to reinterpret the rather loosely define boundaries of love and marriage where you popped the rubber band and burnt the offering.
Tick - tick - tick
As written it is Ok. I don't think the relationship has a chance in hell of lasting. Now that they both acknowledge who she is she will screw up again and get caught again... game over. IMHO that is what I see in the odds.
Great--again!
Size14Shoe and Fregen have it right. The naties among the anonymatii have no gripe; they know exactly what they are getting with JPB and they still read his stuff--religiously! I have never been able to figure that out, I mean why the blasters even open his stories, or anybody's stories when they absolutely know, or almost, that they are going to be irritated, frustrated, and emotionally castrated.
I saw the story as very good. The ending was a bit of a surprise, but that said, JPB has had other stories, among his 700 posted, that have somewhat similar outcomes. I read them all, and some of them a number of times; he is always entertaining and that's what this site--for me--is about.
Matt Moreau
What's the point?
He grand stands and brings about all this drama so she will swallowing his load and fucking her in the ass? Why not find a woman who can be faithful?
Nice
This is a nicely constructed, crafted story. JPB is a master, regardless of what certain readers think about the characters. Size14Shoe hit the nail on the head with his comments.
You Never Know!!!!!
Where Bob is going to come from either you like his style or you do not. I love his style because he write what he wants. Right on BOB!!!!!!
Doormat!
He's a doormat and will always be one.
As long as she tried to keep her cheating from him he could live with it
But when she threw it in his face, he couldn't take it anymore.
A good story Bob, it seemed real to me when I was reading it.
Thanks for the read
Talent/Skill is still the lessor to Subject
When there is no one of value in a story it is likely a just plane bobbie non-original self cuck wimp male humiliation story.
bobbie will never understand that subject trumps talent so he just wimps on down the slippery fetish road with his helpless self cucksters watching their ho's fuck others.
Sure he has a minor following who share his male humiliation self disrespect fetish but they the few are also jaded sicko's { like Matt }.
So bobbie here's another 1 score only because a zero isn't a negative.
comment on a commenter
To all,
"Lifeisreality" has it wrong. JPB has a huge following. I have no idea how many of his stories habve been downloaded, but there is no doubt that it is one very big number. I have maybe fifty whole stories published(compared to Bob's 700) and I am working on four million between SOL and LIT. I can't even imagine what Bob's numbers must be.
The reality is that it is the religious nuts and the nagging nabobs of negativeism that are small in number.
Matt
pathetic
twenty nine years of disrespect and the asshole is happy with a blowjob and an ass fuck as compensation!! pathetic stretch of imagination.
Brandy, Brandy, Brandy..........
1. In the elder generation there are big women surplus because we men died earlier than the women. Bev finds herself alone for her old ages, few old widower/divorced men want a mate who is slut.
2. Bev is lucky because the common children were DNA test proof.
3. I undarstand Rob until his DNA test proof children went away from home remained as a cuckold half wimpy husband to grow up his common children. HOWEVER IT IS THE RIGHT TIME AND HE COULD CHANGE HIS WOMAN. Brandy told him she could wait for him after the divorce!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4. My problem JPB that is he writes almost his all stories without epiloge and THIS STORY GOT A SHORT EPILOGE. I will say with Emile Zola J' accous....JPB to gave up his custom!
From this short epiloge I and others can not imagine Rob to leave Bev. Here the happy endig would have been a new connection for Rob with Brandy!!!!!!
5. For the other commenters, I think JustPlainBob's ARS POETICA is a excellent story, which I offer for everybody who tries to read a JPB's story! The title is: "Older Sluts".
6. JPB's has excellent revenge stories without any epiloge.
Just another stupid "size queen" story
Where was the "love" she confessed in the words written from her POV? Obviously, she felt nothing but contempt for her husband! Does he really trade in the end "staying with her" against "swallowing" and "ass"? For him, it is obviuosly also "just sex". Such characters in a story are not my cup of tea...
2*
My Dream
Some JPB's story were finished by other writers. It would be interesting against the short epiloge somebody will write a sequel where Rob will change his wife to Brandy.
you get what you what and be happy with it...
well he got a slut, knew she was one and was happy finally getting what every other man who fucked her got, and it only took him 29+ years and they all got it in under a week.
wow. are well at lest he had his children by her and that all he seamed to care about.
so at lest he was happy.
a marriage that had lasted twenty-three years
seniors = 1*
IF
You tale all the words in this story and rearrange them,,,,, they make a good story. Otherwise they are circling the bowl. Keep smiling Everyone we're only
Sleeping
This sucked bigtime, but that is what JPB is good at!!!!!!
WOW -
This is one where I have to accept the guy is pretty spineless -
He hates what she does but accepts it because she says she needs it - nothing more - sorry no good - even with the new conditions his acceptance of her reality does not cut it for me.
That said the story is well constructed and nicely written - I enjoyed the reading of it - thanks -
Another wimp from JPB
The author has been writing stories where the male more often than not behaves like a wimp. In short the author loves wimps. Thus it is surprising to see him being one of the most popular authors out there. What does that mean? All the men or a majority of them on this site are wimps? If you are a real man you cannot love this shit. Period. 1 star rating from me.
JPB = Just Pass my Balls
One of his creampie stories. But he does have a couple good ones
*sighs*
If you're going to write a wimp husband story, couldn't he at least have enough backbone to get some strange himself. I mean, damn! Who needs a whore wife?
Sorry
That isn't for love it's only or fear. Fear of being alone or finding someone new or some other problem but it is not for love.
hahaha Miss JPB you one crazy bitch
the wimps says blah blah blah ...and then ..and then .. the bitch says blah blah blah and then that both say blah blah blah blah...hahhahahaahaha and get this it is supposed to be sexy or maybe realistic with meaningful content...hahaha Miss JPB you one funny crazy bitch. I gotta go tell the real human's this story they will bust a gut.
Love?
You cannot love a person that treats you like shit. You can be obsessed with them due to some kind of insecurity, but that is not love. Love is an act. It is a verb. It is something a person DOES. It actually is a choice. To Love someone means that you think about how to improve their life. It means you say and do things that improve their life. It is not normal to love someone who is mistreating you. In fact it is self destructive to exist in a relationship with a person who is hurting you. You must get away from that person. There is no changing that person, they are fucked up. Just get away and find one of the many people that you can share a healthy, cooperative relationship with.
Lower score from me
an wimp, cockold story JPB? really? most corporations have morality clauses, she and her execs could lose their jobs.. she continued to cheat, yes, he stayed? why? the ending was proof, no respect and never will be.. She now knows his stash now try hiding it from lawyers now stupid.
Eww...
I despise cuckolds. Of course, it would be nice to have her suck another woman off my dick before I threw her skanky ass out.
Another Condition
HE is going to sleep with other women. Maybe that waitress would be interested?
Not Love
Love is caring for another person. Spousal love is caring for your mate as much as you care for yourself. It certainly means putting your marriage well ahead of your lust and ego. So, she didn't love him, she never did. She took advantage of his love for her. His love warped into something more like obsession in his willingness to overlook her cheating. So, again - not love - pure pathology.
Now
I see why the average star rating is relatively lower for this story. It appeared that he had grown a pair when he moved out of the MBR and started divorce plans. Applying the "would I be happier with her in my life or happier with her out of my life" test, he (but not I) might think it was a toss-up. Maybe he should first ask the barmaid how she feels about swallowing and anal.
good
I've known of this situation, a couple times in my life, not myself, and as much as I hate to admit it, it worked out for the couple.
HER ONLY AND BIGGEST SUPRISE IS
he fell for it again, TK U MLJ LV NV
Um... no.
Ok, so you say to yourself I love her and want her in my life so what will I put up with...
And then you say too freaking bad. How delusional will I have to be to convince myself that I'm happier with her screwing around and in my life than with her NOT in my life.
Being miserable WITH her feels like the way a dog must feel when you come home after being away all day but even worse because you'd KNOW it.
Good decision Rob...
Can't wait to tap here again. Thanks, Sean
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