All Comments on 'The Shower'

Well written short story that would be more appropriately placed in "Non-Erotic," "Romance," or "Erotic Couplings."

reread your comment it is oxymoronic and stupid.

A good scene, but not very well written. Read some other shower scene stories on this site and you'll see what I mean.

during lunch break.

But nothing ot give me a boner...

This story is very boring and not much else.

This is a TLW story! Not the first (or best) one in the LW section.

I do not understand 'oxymoron' as PistolPete seems to want to use it for Room's statement! I see NOTHING in that statement which could be possibly be interpreted to be oxymoronic!

3*

It was a nice little story, but to me it wasn't erotic at all. Where was the hot sex,loud moaning????

I wasn't expecting a.loving wife in this one. Good story.