The story is quite good, but you do need to proof your story several times before submitting it.
The story was short, passionate, sweet, and most believeable. I do hope you continue writing. You are good. Joe
Many friends feel the same way but neither will make the first move. this story should help some people get off the fence and move forward.
keep wrighting
PLEASE keep writing this story and others. You are very talented and i can't wait for more!
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The story is quite good, but you do need to proof your story several times before submitting it.
Very nice!
The story was short, passionate, sweet, and most believeable. I do hope you continue writing. You are good.
Joe
Nice story
Many friends feel the same way but neither will make the first move. this story should help some people get off the fence and move forward.
keep wrighting
keep wrighting
Terrific Story
PLEASE keep writing this story and others. You are very talented and i can't wait for more!
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