by DG Hear
Another awesome submission. I love it when I see your name next to a title, I always know it will be good. Keep up the great work.
I hope he is good at keeping secrets but a little leverage is always good to have.
Though it might have a very complicated resolution...
When I saw the title and the blurb, I had a so-so reaction but with DGHear signing the story it had to be read...
That Jen was the fiancee was not surprising but I still wonder how she got to Myrtle Beach with her hosts knowing her.... Thanks, Lots of fun!
Just kind of a quicky but fun story to write. Thank you for the nice comments. Always much appreciated.
With Respect
DG
Way to GO!!! LOVED IT! You just keep coming up with Good Ideas.
Looking forward to your next one!
Rob Conner
Looks like dear old dad is getting it up the tailpipe. He deserves it. Moms wish came true, dads new broad is a cheater.
Light and airy and fun to read, complete with a happy ending. Kinda feel sorry for Jim's dad, but he wasn't very likeable anyway.
DG,
Title did and didn't do it justice. Could be four + years....
Great story. Thanks for sharing on Lit.
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I pretty much predicted that Jill would turn out to be Jim's fathers girlfriend, based upon the fact that you tend to follow a bit of a pattern in your writing. I really enjoy your stories. In a medium such as this, it is nice to be able to recognize authors that are most likely to produce quality material. Thanks for sharing.
Any time I see the name DG Hear, I know it will be a story worth reading. I have never been disappointed yet and I've been reading them for a bunch of years now. Thanks for all you do, DG.
You see it coming halfway to the plate (end of story) , maybe a little sooner! But that's too late , theres nothing to do but marvel at the torquing motion, take strike 3 and tip your cap to the modest mastery of D.G. & M.F.
Great plot, great character development with delicious irony...a very satisfying yarn. Than you DG Hear.
Mom Wins!!
He did get a slut!
He will be a cuckold! (Hell he is now)
How sweet it is, Poor old mum would have the last laugh if only she knew.
Kinda destroys the "nice guy" image the protagonist had going up until then!
Blackmail ain't ever OK, even if the target is not a blameless angel.
(Not to mention, what a shitheel ingrate.)
It appears the best summer ever might turn into the best fall, winter, and spring ever, too.
I read with interest. I liked the story and characters. I did not like learning he was just another scumbag when he entered the office and 'forced' sex. It went from an enchanting summer tale to an ugly blackmail story in a few heartbeats.
But I liked it overall and the vote represented that fact.
Another great story. Although, I must say I could already c it all coming some how " Common Sense " . Lol : P
Too stiff. Not a natural flow to the dialogue.
Great story. I love it when a tale has a nice twist and an uncertain future.
love the irony of it and the twist in the tale....can see him getting plenty of her over the four years........
Poor ending,plus the fact his father doesn't deserve some one like Jen because of the way he treated him mother.
There as got to be more,it can't be left hanging like this.Has father deserves some punishment,so perhaps Jim can slut his father and Jen up.Plus it would appear Jen likes to play around,hopefully with Jim and his father finds out.
Would have liked more,eg keep seeing Jen and either get caught by his dad or get Jen pregnant,just to pay his father back for the way he treated his family.
This is a great fantasy story. What every hetero guy would want for his first experience. Highly unlikely but a great fantasy.
This is not a "morality" type story. It's a young man's dream, to lose their virginity to a beautiful woman. It's not supposed to be about the father. I'm seventy one years old and wish I had a memory like this one.
Reminds me of couple of teenage summers in high school and Daytona Beach in mid 60’s during college spring break. There were 3 gals in HS, two 5’9” ident brunette twins with nice big bodies and 1 year older brother and I took them to movies once with no hanky-panky having nuns at a Catholic HS, but the summers at the local swimming pool and lake were great that summer. Another young stacked nice figure blonde for one Summer at pool. All of these gals were from Air Force Families and the local AF base was closed in early 1960’s. I fell in”love” several times in early-mid 60’s. Alas, I fell in love for real at 18, married at 23, finally got lucky and still happy 52 years later!
Baton Rouge Cajun guy!
Some time in the future,I think he should te!ll his mother he shagged her ex husbands wife to be.
Hope Jim and Jen hook up for much more, for a longer period and even maybe for a young one. 5 stars
BJ
What a great story, Now DG here is a story only you could write a sequel to do this great tale justice. What an adventure this could be, James tapping his dad's Fiancé, oh what a drama that would be. This story was well written with great character development. Well done 5-stars.
It definitely cries out for a sequel, preferably where Jen and Jim fall in love and she leaves Jim’s dad for Jim.
Enjoyable read. Sequel could end up exposing dad and Jen. Two for the price of one. 5*...
The twist was obvious from the first time 'bikini lady' appeared, but it was well written. I would have been disappointed if that hasn't been the twist! Good story. Not perfect. 4.5, but I round up, so 5*. It is likely better than I could write.