All Comments on 'Summer of my Dreams'

Read your last two sentences and then look up the word "lesions". I don't think that's what you meant! Some people do get lesions after sex but it's not good! The word you want is "lessons"

You have a potentially very erotic story, but you need to concentrate on your spelling, use of punctuation, capitalization, etc. There are editors here who would love to work with you to help you improve your writing. Don't be discouraged, though, because you have a good story premise. It just gets a little distracting when there are so many errors.

Sounds like you needed more lubrication.

I have to agree with the other comments about spelling, etc. You have a good story; get an editor next time.